~ Poem the 1st Chap. Inspired Bye ~ Part #5
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Went-about to-
pray-one-morning-
to-Jesus, and-as I looked around
and gazed in my way upon-a place a
ways, afar. I could-see-the generousness,
sweetness of the giving-trees as-so-they are. Nestled
down between the broken valley-of Gods-open-will. As they
were-that day one-better sight for-me-to-see; and-one-greater-
pleasure-to-be-told-of, and-for-the-long-standing-passion-of-
my fancy; still. For yes-they are the one true rare beauty's-thriving-
amid-the-grace of this most-humble land. With the wholesome hearts,
and-outstretched-hands. As amid this, the latter-days of the summers-fall.
They stand in the light of Gods hope ready-to provide their bounty, to-
whomever-may-come to-call. For they are open-too, for the many come a
feathered-wing. To-bring-for-them, the-finer-nature, of a better-thing. With-
one glorious purpose brought-forth through the-generosity of-His open-heart;
one-so-softly spoken. There they live to serve-God-moving freely amid
the-beauty forever-evolving-in-the-open way, of-His-tender-love and-
devotion, offering-their solace, as-a-simple haven, one shared in
reverence for the wisdom instilled and-followed-so-humbly-
and-found to-be well, within the nature, of the raven. As
to offer, a sweeter fruit is what they bring. As to sway
they dance, as in their joy they sing, and for the
love of a life as so to renew. Another day has
risen up and shines upon them mid sparkling
morning dew; and if you were to hear them
then surely you-would have listened. As
gingerly they-move to-dance-and-
play in unison; so-as-to-shimmer-
in-their-way-together, as-they-
glisten, and-as-for a gift for
all, a grateful-heart-is
for them-their-only-
passion. As-it
is-in-their-
way, and-
by-our Lord-
God Jesus; One
so-forever; fashioned. ~
"Sorry but I don't think you will be moving on in my contest due to the fact I could'nt even finish it because it
was so long most poems are supposed to me short and sweet.
I'm sorry its just I don't really care for the long ones. It hardly made sense. Your poem I mean. You had a
wonderful start but then you lost my interest because It became long and confusing"
Life in its purity,
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is the glory of God
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defined!
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Sewn within all of us,
a brotherhood with one-
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~ another ... yes-with-Him! ~
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~ Search your heart- ~
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~~~ friends! ~~~
Copyright © James Long | Year Posted 2009
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