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~ Painting Mona Lisa ~

Absolutely enchanting I thought ~ As I drew the curtains wider, to allow in a bit more light.... Returning unto the canvas and dipping my brush Into a slightly brighter shade of beige Thinking perhaps just a touch more violet, a dab of red, and, a stroke of amber Until, I heard the door bell ring, breaking, this mesmerized trance.... Sitting my palette down, and lying my brush aside, atop a colored cloth I turned to see who it was, that was there? "Hold on dear, I shall be right back," I whispered As she smiled amid a radiance, that stopped me within my steps How rarely seldom does one get a chance like this I thought? If it is truly important and I know them Then they shall kindly call, or possibly even leave myself a note Besides, what an unpleasant reflection it would be, to even but for an instant Interrupt this dream.... For no greater beauty have I ever beheld, nor have I ever found, then this Perfection within everyway I believe, is whom she is ~ "What's wrong," she asked, "are you not going to see who it is?" Glistening eyes, as I fixated upon her own, mirrors, of an endless hue "No, not right now dear," as I then, poured her a drink Smiling as she gracefully arose, proposing a toast I said "To this moment, this day, to you and I, this time, and, amore".... As I slowly reached forth my hand, to tenderly caress her rosen cheek And to glide my fingers gently, through her shining auburn hair "Here dear," leading her loveliness softly, "here, sit right there That the sunlight may embrace your boundless beauty This magnificence of your splendor, these wonders, from whom you truly are" ~ Glowingly she smiled once more, as with a passion, I then kissed her perfect lips "I love you," she uttered While as the mornings dew lit rays, reflected upon her enchantedness As a glittering arose about my own heart, and a warming, within my now raptured soul "So do I my love, I love you more," I returned Retrieving my brush, my palette and my cloth Exchanging glances amid knowing thoughts, these souls, so intertwined ~ "Excellent, do not move dear" As always was captured forever, within, this moment right here.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Painting, Mona Lisa~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/20/2014 5:38:00 AM
Wonderful write and congrats on yoiur poem being featured this week, john
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Date: 4/13/2014 10:24:00 PM
I am enchanted! This poem was so lovely. Congratulations on it being featured and so happy it was, so I didn't miss reading it.
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Date: 4/13/2014 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Upon Your Heart's Symbolic Mona Lisa, Being Featured...Love, Jeremy
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Date: 4/13/2014 4:38:00 PM
Nicely done John, even though I don't really like that painting. Congrats on this, your featured poem :) I shall have to read more of your words :)
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Date: 11/26/2009 1:27:00 PM
Hope you are fine,,just in case you ll be reading..your poetry is missed indeed John..Charma
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Date: 6/21/2009 12:20:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhh........U r such a romantic poet.....!!! why not go ahead and direct a movie my friend....?? Lovely write....!!!! If shakespeare happen to read your work, im sure he'll be jealous of u.....No exaggerations!!! This is Superb!!!.......Brilliant write!!!.......................!!!!
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Date: 6/13/2009 9:57:00 AM
I wanted to thank you for reading my work-it's such an incredible feeling to hear that someone likes what you've written. I enjoyed this piece on your "mona lisa"...i love poems that paint a picture of beauty that i can feel-i felt her. to answer your question of my mona lisa-i love her because she was a woman without a story-and that allowed her to have millions. thanks again!-ann
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Date: 6/5/2009 6:46:00 AM
I realy like this poem.I try to sound deep and all that.But it doesn't work so well all the time.
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:10:00 PM
this is one of the most beautiful poem i ever read,ur a romantic ,a poet ,an artist and even a good friend,its going to my favs, and please check soup mail my friend---charma
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:39:00 AM
Thanks for letting us in to see your beautiful lady. The guy at the door will damn well have to wait. I agree....inspiration must not be interrupted. Love, daver
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Date: 4/17/2009 6:35:00 AM
Johnny, you have not painted anything since 'red rabbit' and I miss your canvas ... this is great dramatic poem, and the dialogue is so intimate that the conversation pulls one in, ... and I cannot but see the master standing before the pallette ... in love. Masterful skill displayed, my friend, a genius of a poem.
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:21:00 PM
so romantic,i checked to see if you wrote something new,you didnt,then my hands led me to this wonderful piece of romantic art-you re a great poet,artist too-charma
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:08:00 PM
Masterful work John, you illustrated a masterpiece...Raul
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Date: 3/18/2009 9:46:00 PM
Passion and tenderness glide through your words. Not only does this paint a picture of the painting within it paints a picture on the soul of the reader. As we read it like a story we a drawn in by the magic of the dream and given the opportunity to experience true art and beauty from the eyes and soul of the artist. You my friend are that artist brushing beautiful words into vivid images. Great writing. As the "Mona Lisa" is, this too is a masterpiece. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 2/28/2009 4:26:00 PM
Hi John! I know I read this beautiful write before but it is certainly worth reading more than once! This is written with such tenderness and is filled with so many lovely phrases. I hope you are well today! I am still pokey but I am getting there! (2 Corinthians 3:16-18) God bless you always John! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/26/2009 3:07:00 PM
John, I can just see her sitting there with that crooked smile wondering why you are so smitten! Very nice! Caolyn
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Date: 2/24/2009 12:07:00 PM
oooohhhhh...THIS IS A GREAT WRITE! I loved the story you drew up, you bring the reader to your home in this vivid and enchanting tale of "Painting Mona Lisa" Bravo darling, bravo and very well done! All my thanks for this cherrished poem~ Bye for now, Janers
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Date: 2/22/2009 10:46:00 AM
aww you write so well, hi hope all is well, now i can log into the sight and send messages just thought I'd say we thinking of you too and you in our hearts also, I will start to write something soon, bit of writers block LOL, had to sort loads of stuff out at school for my son but all is well now and bullying has stoped, so prais the Lord for that prayer answered. God bless you John much love diane
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Date: 2/22/2009 8:59:00 AM
The softness of this poem, reflects the beauty of the painting itself. Lovely work, John! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/22/2009 6:05:00 AM
so beautiful.. lovely were they way you painted the picture... so charming Sir, your write!! loved it... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/22/2009 5:54:00 AM
John you romantic you..LOL.brother such a beautiful picture painted..love the entire scene..you write so well brother and your words are so easily digest making for a comfortable time for the reader.. I enjoyed every moment of this piece..well done on this canvas.
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Date: 2/22/2009 5:12:00 AM
Enchanting, romantic write, I love this....always, Christy
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