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Ocean Waves

Waves of the ocean are the music of the sea, They hum and rumble in a perfect harmony. Songs of the tides they compose, produced by the moon, By using the wind to putter a rhythmic tune. Dances of the loops, spins and leaps they carry out, And blustery plays of thrills and chills they act out. Blazing art they construct, on the ocean surface, With strokes of sapphire and amber in countless shades. Figures of foamy mountains they chisel and sculpt, And embellish the beach with seashells and pebbles. Ocean waves are the echoes of eternity, And perfect models of implacable beauty.

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Date: 2/12/2024 8:31:00 PM
A lovely Rhyme poem that is also a Couplet poem, Smita. Your imagery was vibrant and there is a nice rhythm as I read it. Hope to see more of your poetry. A poet friend (to be) in Texas, Bill
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/14/2024 12:55:00 PM
Thank you very much for your inspiring feedback dear poet friend Bill and glad that you liked my poem. -Smita
Date: 2/10/2024 4:03:00 PM
Gorgeous couplet my dear poet friend Smita. You've painted the beautiful ocean amazingly with your creative words. I enjoyed immensely reading this. It leaves a feeling of peace and relaxation. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 2/12/2024 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Len for your encouragement! It's much appreciated!!

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