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My Ruthless Dreams COLLABORATION

Up early and off to school I must go Full of pep and not too slow, That was then when I was young This is now a new age I have begun, How I hate them as I climb out of bed Early mornings are for the dead, Unreasonable I must seem Unyieldingly demanding where is my coffee cream, But I did love them bed and pillow Seems so long ago I dreamed of an armadillo, Now they‘re ruthless dreams I just can’t do them with ice cream, I’m now past my prime teens. 8-23-2019 "for contest COLLABORATION sponsored by Line Gauthier"

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Date: 9/3/2019 6:29:00 PM
Helllo Paula Goldsmith, we all age whether we like it or not. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/20/2019 10:52:00 PM
Thank You, for reading and writing. I love to hear from other writers. Enjoy your weekend.........
Date: 9/1/2019 4:25:00 AM
ruthless dream the past now melting as out of freeze ice-cream!///beautiful poem; enjoyed
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/1/2019 9:57:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank You, for reading and the wonderful note.......
Date: 8/28/2019 7:43:00 PM
Bed and pillow indeed "a new age i have begun". Congrats, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/28/2019 9:59:00 PM
I enjoyed your note. Thanks for reading and writing.....
Date: 8/26/2019 8:00:00 AM
This poem takes me back, and I feel how it was in your busy shoes. Well crafted poem
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2019 10:08:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and writing. I love to hear what other writers think. Glad you liked it. It was fun to write......
Date: 8/26/2019 3:20:00 AM
demanding coffee and cream...hum.. yes. I agree. Exellent write, hugs. Ann
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Date: 8/24/2019 8:30:00 PM
Hello Paula … well aware about your poem. I recall when I thought forty was old and will I ever reach eighteen. Time travels much quicker than we think - thank you Paula - Lindsay
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. I love to hear what other writers have to say. Funny how we want to get older, then we get older & we want to be young again........
Date: 8/23/2019 6:57:00 PM
You sure had fun here...but I believe the getting up early part...that is real...it's more of a mind thing as we age...body parts can relax...All the best Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2019 7:22:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. Yes, I did have fun here. Fun is what it is all about. Right????? Thanks for the best wishes.....