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My Dream Vacation

Sponsor: L. Milton Hankin 5/4/22 'MY DREAM VACATION' Stunning, amazing, outstanding view! Bright sunny sky, The sea such a beautiful blue. Walking barefoot, feeling the softness of sand, With a gentle breeze, There's such beauty on this land. Boats sailing, Surfers galore, People having fun! I pick up shells on the shore. Clean fresh air, Not a car in sight, Peaceful, calm and such a delight. A gentle stroll along the sea, Splashing quietly against my toes, There's no better place to be. Enjoy the peace and tranquility, It feels special, It's for everyone to see. We should appreciate the beauty around, Days go so quickly, We have all found. For now this vacation is all in my head, But hopefully soon, we will all be together, It will be reality instead!

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Date: 9/12/2023 12:57:00 PM
It is MY dream vacation too. Wonderful, Jeanette. I hope you got a win for this
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 9/17/2023 12:47:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments. It is lovely to be at the beach with family.
Date: 6/28/2022 8:25:00 AM
"MY DREAM VACATION" is a wonderful write. Wish that was my vacation. Walking/writing on the beach would be heavenly. Have a blessed day............
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 9/17/2023 12:49:00 AM
Yes, it would be nice to be at the beach again. Thank you for your kind comments and for reading my posts.
Date: 3/6/2022 9:17:00 PM
Great entry for contest Jeanette, love it.
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 3/6/2022 11:28:00 PM
Thank you! I'm glad you like the poem.
Date: 3/5/2022 10:35:00 AM
Well said and done! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
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Jeanette Brewin
Date: 3/6/2022 11:29:00 PM
Thank you! I'm glad you like the poem.

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