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unrhymed couplets 

An artist paints a picture out of darkness 
from the seven colours of sunshine's sparkle

Divine beauties bridge over this promise made real 
ocean waves unfolding white steeds galloping to shore

Kissed by the sand salted footprints remain begging 
as the stream flows down a mountain faced horizon

Echos bounce within deep caves whispering winds lament
currents move tides caressing the sea fragrance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/26/2018 8:35:00 AM
My friend, everything you post here shows your massive talent.. Unrhymed couplets, I believe I've never done myself but this is exceptional..
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Date: 7/24/2018 8:43:00 AM
Wow! Liam, so well done.
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Date: 7/23/2018 2:51:00 PM
So beautiful Liam...So very beautiful.
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Date: 7/23/2018 11:42:00 AM
Love "caves whispering winds lament" great line, well done Liam...
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Date: 7/22/2018 7:32:00 PM
Very descriptive! Wonderful imagery Liam. Poetry is art and you have painted a lovely scene.
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Date: 7/22/2018 4:34:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 7/22/2018 4:05:00 PM
A beautiful poem Liam..excellent imagery in joyful tone.
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