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Joseph May's Choose A Line 2 Contest... 25 May 25 ...'The darkened skies stole my tears '

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From the pleasure of your soul, I glow Through starlight... a kiss, my gaze can't forego And dawn approaches upon us to bring Soft caress of air into me shall blow 'The darkened skies stole my tears'...to you, I cling. Chorus: Dearest , somehow my fervent life you hold Breathless as my heart beguiled... takes a leap, Then tame me now, let all demands unfold Tame me now within an affection deep. ~ There are no longer tears, we wander sweet, Enchanting our eve its heavenly treat-- That pulses heat when charmed laughter peals Warmer a slow dance, my yearning complete Tender the gaze, the kiss… our joys replete. 4th place

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Date: 6/6/2025 8:15:00 PM
Now this… I understand. Beautifully felt and written on the heart!
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Date: 5/30/2025 9:36:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Love's Sweet Moment" a lovely/wonderful write again. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Date: 5/30/2025 8:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, Nicely done
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Date: 5/26/2025 10:32:00 PM
"From the pleasure of your soul, I glow " "Where love's movement rises, we cling...we cling." you write some of the best romantic poems, Nette!! I love your writing, it stills my mind- I've said that before.
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Date: 5/26/2025 9:56:00 AM
Wow love this romantic song. So lyrical and tender
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Date: 5/26/2025 9:17:00 AM
How warm this poem is to my soul, two who are embraced by love from hearts shared...Frederic
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:10:00 PM
You have created a beauty of love df Nette. Do you plan to sing this song soon?. My good wishes for your singing df. Love n best wishes always...Ravindra
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Date: 5/25/2025 10:20:00 AM
Wow!!! So beautiful sis! I can't wait for the melody. You're are an excellent song writer. I love it, Thanks a lot for sharing! Hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 9:26:00 AM
"Love's Sweet Moment" is a lovely/wonderful write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away.........
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