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" Light " My Flier

.                                                                Feast
                                                               Godlike
                                                           Clear nectar-
                                                          Birdie’s Brandy
                                                               Sipped
                                                                 Hot!!
                                                              Trumpet
                                                           Scarlet sage-
                                                        A Hummingbird’s
                                                               Pepper
                                                                Fuels
                                                              Physics
                                                          Married pair-
                                                      Same ruby throats
                                                              Burned

Copyright © Sandra Hudson | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/14/2009 10:34:00 PM Interesting lanterne series with creative use of imagery. Nice job! Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 6/30/2009 2:48:00 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Sandra Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Hyle Chu Date: 6/29/2009 9:42:00 PM For some reason, I'm thirsty. Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 6/29/2009 7:48:00 PM This is lovely writing my friend..I love how it goes down smoothly as I read it.....very nice. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/29/2009 7:32:00 PM nice poem... the hummingbird is my favourite of birds.. in answer to your question, my poem is mostly spiritual, I call to the dragon my power animal, I am a strong woman, and a frightened child, in one... Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 6/29/2009 6:22:00 PM yes! just a really fun poem to read filled with glorious sounding words!!!! wow Sandra! I'm impressed!! jim Login to Reply

Kareena Goodwin Date: 6/29/2009 6:03:00 PM Humming birds pepper fules... niceee :-) I like this poem I'm new to the poetry soup world so if you can please read some of my work and tell me what you think. Please and thank you Login to Reply