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" Light " my Flier



.                                                                Feast
                                                               Godlike
                                                           Clear nectar-
                                                          Birdie’s Brandy
                                                               Sipped
                                                                 Hot!!
                                                              Trumpet
                                                           Scarlet sage-
                                                        A Hummingbird’s
                                                               Pepper
                                                                Fuels
                                                              Physics
                                                          Married pair-
                                                      Same ruby throats
                                                              Burned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/14/2009 10:34:00 PM
Interesting lanterne series with creative use of imagery. Nice job! Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 6/30/2009 2:48:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sandra Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/29/2009 9:42:00 PM
For some reason, I'm thirsty.
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Date: 6/29/2009 7:48:00 PM
This is lovely writing my friend..I love how it goes down smoothly as I read it.....very nice.
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Date: 6/29/2009 7:32:00 PM
nice poem... the hummingbird is my favourite of birds.. in answer to your question, my poem is mostly spiritual, I call to the dragon my power animal, I am a strong woman, and a frightened child, in one...
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:22:00 PM
yes! just a really fun poem to read filled with glorious sounding words!!!! wow Sandra! I'm impressed!! jim
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:03:00 PM
Humming birds pepper fules... niceee :-) I like this poem I'm new to the poetry soup world so if you can please read some of my work and tell me what you think. Please and thank you
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