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Last call for alcohol inside the bar. He then got up and stumbled to his car. While driving home, he read somebody’s text, and then he got to thinking about sex. His drinking and his texting were but two of many things he loved too much to do. And so he thought he’d dial home to his wife, crashed into a pole and lost his addict’s life. Dec. 23, 2020 for Rob Levasseur's "Addiction Poetry Contest"

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Date: 12/30/2020 1:29:00 AM
A simple telling tale told with clarity, needing no commentary. Good one, Andrea.
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Date: 12/29/2020 6:44:00 PM
I like how you've presented this addict's cravings and misadventures so starkly, without trying to 'get cerebral' or complex about 'underlying facts.' Addicts don't deserve undue sympathy just b/c they're 'not responsible for their actions.' (I feel the same way about murderers). I know I'm in the minority here, but anyway I really like how you penned this, Andrea. Season's best, Gershon
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Date: 12/27/2020 7:50:00 PM
I think I'm all caught up on your recent poems. It isn't like you to go four days without a new one! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 12/27/2020 7:49:00 PM
A good warning, albeit sad to think how often this happens. Even worse when innocent victims are involved (like my cousin at age 26). Well done.
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Date: 12/27/2020 7:12:00 PM
So very sad. It is hard for me to adequately express my feelings here because I’ve seen what happens first hand when people...well, you know. Good poem, positive message. Hopefully someone in need will see your post and think about it.
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Date: 12/27/2020 8:46:00 AM
Very nice entry into my poetry contest. And this is all too real a result. But by the grace of God I didn't kill an innocent bystander, when I was in the throes of my own addiction to alcohol.
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Date: 12/26/2020 11:54:00 PM
Good story , but so sad, Andrea, enjoyed reading. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/26/2020 10:52:00 PM
Especially during the Holiday season when sometimes there is to much alcohol used in celebrating. Good timing on this one Andrea
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Date: 12/26/2020 8:26:00 PM
Reality with the drunken drivers so perfectly penned in the poem.
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Date: 12/26/2020 11:38:00 AM
Great poem short and to the point possibly will make someone think before New Years.
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Date: 12/25/2020 6:44:00 AM
You did it simple and straight, Andrea, drunken driving can be dangerous, combined with texting, it surely kills you..
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Date: 12/25/2020 1:48:00 AM
I feel there is a funny side to this poem. Addiction is always problematic. ~~
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Date: 12/24/2020 7:01:00 PM
This is so sad and a truth that many would relate to.. also great rhyme from your wonderful pen with a powerful message. Merry Christmas to you and family Andrea. Prayers and hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 12/24/2020 1:30:00 PM
Sad and true - there are people like this in life, and it breaks my heart when innocent, unsuspecting wives are involved. Great poem Andrea - happy Christmas. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. '
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Date: 12/24/2020 11:24:00 AM
This is happening frequently. A deadly tri-binational. Car, auto and texting.
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Date: 12/23/2020 11:25:00 PM
Wow, powerful message in there Andrea, and you are so right....Happy Christmas to you and family..All the best for 2021. Harry
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Date: 12/23/2020 8:37:00 PM
Hello Andrea … this is the time of the year when it is sadist of all. A very relevent verse indeed Andrea - have a great festive season but stay safe - Lindsay
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Date: 12/23/2020 5:18:00 PM
WoW!Andrea, This is so sad. And a reality for a lot of people. Drunk driving cost him his life. Best wishes in the contest. Ps, I wrote one for the contest as well. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/23/2020 3:42:00 PM
sad sad sad... oh so sad... addiction is bad, bad, bad... oh so bad. Your poem rings a bell for so many - God bless you always, dear Andrea
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Date: 12/23/2020 2:59:00 PM
with Christmas on us we'll have the usual drink and drive brigade out with no thought for others. Hope you have a lovely Christmas Andrea. Tom
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Date: 12/23/2020 2:34:00 PM
sad on so many levels Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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