Justice

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November-28-2023

Monotangled Sense Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Dilly Dally

justice sweats under its weight- an asthmatic laboring for its breath

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Terry Miller

Date: 12/11/2023 12:58:00 AM

very profound and so well written; congratulations

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 9:38:00 AM

This was a deep one..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/29/2023 7:36:00 AM

Valsa, your one-liner is truly captivating and profound. The depth and potency of your message are both thought-provoking and soul-stirring.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/28/2023 3:55:00 PM

how profound, Valsa...it actually left me momentarily breathless...just wow! have a splendid evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/28/2023 11:38:00 AM

Very interesting and deep one liner dear poet.. will take time to process this one...

Ink Empress

Date: 11/28/2023 6:59:00 AM

This is so deep and powerful what you’ve conveyed here in few syllables dear valsa. Thought provoking and soul hitting. I love your wordplay here and how it flows too. Justice a subject that we can talk about in many ways and you’ve done that very well and the word “ asthmatic “ adds on to the strength of this piece, goodluck if this is for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/28/2023 3:04:00 AM

- painful ... disease, Valsa - Great written - GL in the contest :) - hugs