Jolted by Twilight

Quote: "Tomorrow's sun will rise, either in splendor or behind a mask of clouds, but it will rise." Unknown Author of a well known poem.

As the day meanders by,
Sunbeams still stream from the sky, 
With so many promises left to fulfil.
And a relaxed sensation lingers still.
Euphoric stimulations rush through my mind,
A pulsating tempo, urging me on to unwind.
A peace in knowing, what I know to be so,
I fret for the knowledge of what I don’t know.
Alarmed yet inspired by the sun’s sudden sinking.
The loss of this day sets my mind feverishly thinking.
A panicked realization, harshly jolted by twilight.
The day is ending and turning to night.
I watch the golden orb with its crimson halo.
Each unfinished promise must wait, this I know.
The sun melts into the far off shadowy hills,
My failure to complete each task, now gives me chills.
However, sunset’s glowing beauty of splendor untold.
I rest as night’s velvety blanket begins to unfold.
With a sweetness, and a warm tranquil overtone. 
Knowing that tomorrow’s arrival is surely set in stone.

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Date: 11/12/2024 7:38:00 PM
Jolted indeed with happiness and joy to read you again. Blessings & cheers dear friend.
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 5/13/2025 8:21:00 PM
Thank you sweet friend.
Date: 11/11/2024 11:29:00 AM
Wendy, what a thrilling poem as you are "jolted" into a new morning full of promise! So happy to see you posting again! Sending blessings and best wishes for the contest. Beautiful imagery of sleeping and waking!
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Date: 11/12/2024 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Sam. Such a kind thoughtful message, was read bringing much pleasure. Many best wishes from Wen.
Date: 11/9/2024 12:57:00 PM
Speaks! good that you are posting! Missed your presence and poetry. "I rest as night’s velvety blanket begins to unfold. With a sweetness, and a warm tranquil overtone" this line gives hope that you'll be fine, dear SV. *Great contender!
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/9/2024 3:11:00 PM
You are right dear friend. Everything WILL be alright soon. Thank you for your kind words Anaya. .. Wen <3
Date: 11/9/2024 9:59:00 AM
Dear SV, it's wonderful to see you back! So sorry to read below about the hardship experienced by you and your husband in the last few months. My prayers to you and your family for your husband's continued recovery. Your poem is a poignant introspection. I was especially moved by your verses "A peace in knowing, what I know to be so,/I fret for the knowledge of what I don’t know." Your vivid emotional and physical imagery brings me to the center of your poetic scene with ease. Warmest wishes my poetess friend.. ~Susan
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/9/2024 12:45:00 PM
Dear Susan, such a warming comment you have bestowed. I resigned myself to never writing again, seeing it as an indulgence and a frivolous waste of time. A chain of thoughts sprung to mind when I read the title of this challenge, and was compelled to offer them as a Soup post. Maybe in times of stress, a little selfishness is allowable, even though I know my time could be more productively spent. Thank you for your delightful encouragement. Best wishes from Wen.
Date: 11/9/2024 5:18:00 AM
Hey welcome back! I've been in the penalty box before, not much fun. I like your take on the theme. If only our tomorrows really were set in stone. Someday they will be.
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Date: 11/9/2024 6:04:00 AM
Oh I'm sorry there was a blog or something that said you were temporarily suspended. Sorry to hear about hubby. I know you'll take good care best you can
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 11/9/2024 6:00:00 AM
G'day. My Penalty Box was my husband being in hospital for 17 weeks Tom. He is finally home but still needs intensive care by me and his family. In 70 years I have never lived a single day when a tomorrow didn't follow. No matter how today turned out, there will ALWAYS be a tomorrow. Your thoughtful comments are appreciated.
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