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* I Saw You

I saw you shaking afraid broken bleeding hungry mistrusting I reached out you let me love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/1/2010 10:51:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, I know that you love animal so much and give great care. But when I read this beautiful poem, I couldn't help but think of a child, frightened and emotionally alone. It has that much power. Love you. Dane
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Date: 1/21/2010 2:05:00 PM
Very nice..precise free verse...HUGS!!! Light & Love
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Date: 1/19/2010 4:04:00 PM
And love pours from your giving heart. This is such a nice glimpse of you. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen
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