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How the deceit in his eyes blinds like ash, It clings to me in deafening silence As I wail aloud only the moonlight hears... This lesion from summers ago comes, blunt That now whenever dusk burns a flame I review embers of memories crackling Within a buried voice...raging, raging Like an explosive, thin gas that devours All the coal within my scorched plight... But then, his fraudulent gaze now heals my heart. Re-Entered: 9/21/2016 100 in a ROW CONTEST: For PD A

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Date: 9/25/2016 7:23:00 PM
Nette-a scar in the marrow...wow deep and beautiful :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/24/2016 9:48:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. :):):) Stop by my latest blog "Last Laugh." if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/28/2015 2:21:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2015 4:08:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win nette.. great pen!
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Date: 11/24/2015 10:52:00 PM
This is nice nette,congrats on the win...hugs
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:47:00 PM
beautifully penned Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:13:00 PM
Nette..congrats on your win in my first contest! Very lovely and emotive :)-lu *smiles*
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