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fresh morning melodies

a lone goldfinch sings chirping away before dawn~ sunny melody outside my window a robin sings to the finch~ morning serenade a blue jay squawks loud waking up the neighborhood~ cat clowder begins 6/3/2020 Contest: Fresh Traditional Haiku Sponsor: JCB Burl

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Date: 6/14/2020 4:54:00 PM
This is fantastic. Great imagery. It will get anyone's morning off to a good start.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/14/2020 5:38:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/7/2020 10:45:00 AM
Very lovely-- my wife and I like to listen for the birds singing on our morning walks--congrats, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/7/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/7/2020 9:08:00 AM
A very comforting creation. Congrats!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/7/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/6/2020 10:53:00 AM
Goldfinch, robin and blue jay creating their own symphony. Beautiful Tania. Congratulations on your win :)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/6/2020 6:38:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 6/6/2020 9:25:00 AM
It seems you have one, congrats. I enjoyed these three.;0)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/6/2020 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Rick!
Date: 6/6/2020 7:00:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Tania:-) hugs jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/6/2020 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Date: 6/4/2020 1:38:00 PM
what great imagery Tania I especially like the final one!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/4/2020 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Date: 6/4/2020 4:52:00 AM
Three lovely images Tania Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/4/2020 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Tom!