* Foot Prints On the Heart

A day comes when you know
the many people that have come
and gone have left you with
many foot prints on your heart.

The foot print treads imprinted
deep on the heart of one looking
at life differently through eyes,
open now wide taking everything in.

Eyes, once dark, lost, empty seeing
nothing but the ugliness life once held.
Escaping through the boarded up,
windows sealed with black paint.

Seeing the beauty all around embracing,
all that is seen, soaking it in like a sponge,
when wet holds all that it has soaked in.
releasing only when squeezed out.

The foot prints of the many people who,
have come and gone are the sponges
within her heart, squeezing out only the,
ones which held her captive for so long.

Others, she keeps tucked away within,
remembering all of them who have passed.
Their foot prints impacted on the heart of,
the one now with eyes wide open.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/3/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through the first round Rhonda. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with two poems. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 10/21/2009 9:37:00 AM
Oh, I Love This One Rhonda... Going Into My Fav's... This was so beautifully and metaphorically written... It touches the Reader's Hearts, (because everyone can relate to this one...) MoonBee
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Date: 10/15/2009 4:15:00 PM
Lovely thoughts, Rhonda. Everyone we meet leaves a footprint on her heart, some good and some bad, but they remain forever. Very uplifting and nicely written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/15/2009 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us Rhonda. I must say it was enjoyable reading for me today. Thank you. Love, Carol
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