Five dollar words to say I've lost you

My dearest love,

I pray that theses words find the strength to covey beyond the mere definitions they keep. I seem to have lost you in a riddle, a battle of inability's. or at the very least I've misplaced you within corrupted ideas of what you and i once were, a totality thru a proximity of souls.  Though my actionless vernacular vastly tells a different story to the contrary. It is only but the corner piece to a thousand parts, that  I have yet to lay.  still i find myself mesmerized by the haunting of foreign eyes. subsites  for your lack of understanding or for a lack of better words. Not so long ago they held me to the flames of lustful desire. I fell Persecuted for the feeding of a lonely heart.  The loss stretches beyond mere mortal comprehension. Its vastly seamless in its threaded existence. boundless, I know no measure to compare my love to thee extended hands and feet are of  consequence. there is no resolve.

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Date: 5/25/2025 10:25:00 PM
Dear Joseph, This is so deeply moving , sincere and evocative in nature, how youv expressed in such a seamless manner, and in a way that readers too feel the loss that you are grieving in such a poetic manner. I really love the way youv written especially "Not so long ago they held me to the flames of lustful desire. I fell Persecuted for the feeding of a lonely heart. The loss stretches beyond mere mortal comprehension. " hits home for me; soul stirring really! Ah such love, the intensity of emotions we feel, through giving part or entire heart to another, i felt that through your poetic letter! Pleasure visiting you today! Sending you light always
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joseph randall
Date: 5/26/2025 7:56:00 AM
thank you very much for the kind words. they mean the world to me
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