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Finding the Source of Paradise

Finding that vision making the soul twinkle There is times late at night creeping shadows of a past Hard being alone as darkness can hold touching cold fingers of ice A vice strangling the deepest thoughts Winds moan and groan on stormy seas howl Rainfalls clouded with loneliness Making warm memories seem shallow and empty Source of emotions feel worthless Closed away barriers rise a great wall Echoes cutting through the pain that remains In despair wounded love is an affliction of the hurt In the twilight of morn I see sparkling dewdrops Starlight tears awakens As the sun peaks over the mountains top A rainbow glistens on blades of grass upon the ground you are reborn love growing stronger each and every day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/15/2016 8:48:00 AM
Sad with hope flooding the mind at the end of the piece. Well done Liam.
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Date: 5/15/2016 7:11:00 AM
Nature is healing and inspiring. Beautiful visions there.
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Date: 5/14/2016 8:14:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most sad but very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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