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Evening Trolley-Car

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The sunrays huddles beneath clouds Horizon as still night enshrouds. The busy city starts to sleep As clouds still continues to weep. Late-night passerby most gracious Passengers restlessly anxious. The evening trolley-car arrives Passengers bound to their home lives. Within hearts and life paradise Fervent souls with His sacrifice. 5/12/2023

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Date: 5/19/2023 4:44:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Eve with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/19/2023 4:43:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Eve with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/18/2023 10:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... a lovely poem, Eve :) -hugs
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:59:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you, and belated Happy Mother's day to you.
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Date: 5/16/2023 9:29:00 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great evening my friend-Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2023 7:24:00 PM
"Within hearts and life paradise Fervent souls with His sacrifice" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2023 11:46:00 AM
EVE, Your writing is excellent and descriptive. Your winning couplet in my contest deserves earnest acclaim. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2023 2:09:00 AM
Splendid poem in couplets. Eve. Hope you feel better.
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