Dried Petals

she is the most beautiful wild flower time ran fast fades the glamour living in twilight zone.

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Poet Tacito

Date: 1/21/2014 12:56:00 AM

Incredible. Time is always against us and it doesn't wait. Embrace the seconds.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/20/2014 5:37:00 PM

Time wins the marathons! Great workrmky AiyaH, Hugs, chuck

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/22/2014 8:34:00 AM

thank you, Chuck!!! :))

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/20/2014 7:10:00 AM

I use to live watching that show when I was a kid. I do love those moments in life when for a moment time stands still a n a memory is permanently etched on my heart. The quickness of life is a bit disconcerting.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/20/2014 8:04:00 AM

Rick...no one can replace of that treasure we kept in our heart...though time runs so fast..it leaves us a great memories!!! .. thank you for your comment and visit!! OXOX..*__*

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/19/2014 12:05:00 AM

yes, I understand that tiime runs fast thingy. But it has been good to me. Don't you just love those short forms. If you don't please don't answer. I'm hooked. I thought Kimo was japanese, but I see the soup says the middle east. Good work on a short not so easy form.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/20/2014 7:58:00 AM

thank you ,Charles for an effort to comment on my poem.. ;)) i appreciate your visit and comment so mucH..!!! Thank you... i got inspired writing KIMO from the moment i saw the contest of Nette...and tried to made one for the contest... :))

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/18/2014 7:11:00 PM

A beautiful and poetic write, nicely done cheri and thank you for your wonderful commments. cheri

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/20/2014 7:59:00 AM

my dearest, Cherl...thank you so much.. oxox.. *__*