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Succumbing to child-like fantasy glee To my special boy’s haven I do flee Meeting his friends, Kindo, Lovey, Deelight As well as Valiente of great smile’s might. Kindo shares blessings with gestures so kind Helping fellow kids in projects designed Lovey likewise showers healthy pop cheer Thus, the hyper-actives stay tamely dear. Around cute Deelight, laughter does abound Her blissful antics surround freedom sound Meanwhile, Valiente boosts children’s courage Propelling them to surmount weakness’ cage. Midst this pleasure scene, I’m stirred to pray Beseeching God for gracious hope-faith ray To build up lives through His compassion deed Propped by His grace* commencing from love’s seed.
*2John 1:3 Grace be with you, mercy, and peace, from God the Father, and from the Lord Jesus Christ, the Son of the Father, in truth and love. December 28, 2020 10th place, "COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(40)" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/16/2021.

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Date: 1/16/2021 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Yes, we need more grace, mercy, and peace. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................
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Date: 12/29/2020 2:48:00 PM
Lovely. Ann
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Date: 12/29/2020 2:27:00 PM
It sounds like you and your children are surrounded by both heavenly and earthly blessings. Beautiful!
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Date: 12/28/2020 11:53:00 PM
That’s lovely Beata, children who are loved learn to love and enjoy life too. I enjoyed the peek into the haven of your boy’s Fantasy Land... Belle
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Date: 12/28/2020 7:50:00 PM
This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. "To build up lives through His compassion" Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. You have created a Masterpiece my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 12/28/2020 10:54:00 AM
Beata, This poem's sweet troupe. Reminds me of of the lost boys from Peter Pan's Never Never Land. Blessings in the finale of days. -Richard
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