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Caturday

laying down for the nap stretching out long sleepy orange kitty snow sprinkles down paw prints all around kitty runs to hide longing to get out watching birds and squirrels oh, no, hot paws coming thru the trees lights turn on cat eyes shining look into the sky wild and free bobcat on mountain top moonlight stars twinkle prowling the night skies morning light cat sleeps morning walking path the sun gets in eyes lingering heat cat sighs 4 / 7 / 2013

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Date: 5/20/2017 4:46:00 PM
Great Haikus, I like cats and I like this string of Haikus, well written, Roy.
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Date: 4/11/2017 2:22:00 AM
Hi Debbie , you caught the cat nicely
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:31:00 PM
love this fun write
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Date: 6/10/2013 9:46:00 AM
This is cute now I want to take a catnap. Nicely done. love phyl
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/10/2013 12:32:00 PM
Thank you phyl ;}
Date: 5/27/2013 11:19:00 PM
Nice work!! :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/27/2013 11:23:00 PM
Thank you ;}
Date: 5/15/2013 3:20:00 PM
these are truly wonderful Debbie...
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Date: 5/12/2013 10:28:00 PM
Cats are som marvelous and mysterious. You capture their essence in this poem. Peace and Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/22/2013 10:22:00 PM
Gotta love a set of Haiku about the cat! brilliant and beautiful. I like the cat's eyes shining in the dark. Really cool orange cat you must have. Always, Laura
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/23/2013 9:24:00 PM
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Date: 4/21/2013 6:27:00 PM
I've had many cats Debbie and this is awesome...
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/21/2013 10:26:00 PM
thank you Donna ;}
Date: 4/19/2013 9:12:00 PM
You described most of the cats I have known. Nice work. Thanks for reading and commenting on my stone cycle... Jack
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/21/2013 8:21:00 PM
thank you Jack ;}
Date: 4/18/2013 11:29:00 AM
This is so SWEET!!! I love your title, and each of your well-metered verses is a delight to read. Well done Debbie!! Best wishes, Keith
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/18/2013 12:30:00 PM
I thank you Keith ;}
Date: 4/14/2013 5:57:00 PM
Very clever, indeed. Cat eyes are something special, as is the poet who writes about them. Thank-you for being here and providing all this fun!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/15/2013 1:53:00 AM
thank you Duke
Date: 4/14/2013 3:13:00 PM
Every day of the week. :) Enjoyed spending the day with your cat. :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/14/2013 8:14:00 PM
thank you ;}
Date: 4/13/2013 6:16:00 PM
Hi Debbie" Thanks for your comment on my poem today. I have used the Haiku Syllable Counter down in Resources on the left. It is fun when it calcualates and you have a perfect 5-7-5 score.
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Date: 4/13/2013 3:03:00 PM
Lovely set of cat haikus. The title is a clever play on words. So fun to see their antics come to life through these words.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/13/2013 4:58:00 PM
Thank you Suz
Date: 4/13/2013 12:51:00 PM
love these fun haiku : )
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/13/2013 5:06:00 PM
thank you jack ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 8:54:00 PM
Oh Debbie, I'm longing for a cat. he he he.. and here you have one laying on your lap, and the one prancing for a snack or two, by the tree. My favorite haiku IMAGE is the one with the cat prints in the snow.. poor kitty kitty.. and my favorite haiku, is the free ranger called the BOBCAT! they are all puuuurrrrrfect... meow... xox~ LINDA
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 9:00:00 PM
thank you Linda ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 7:38:00 PM
as a cat lover, I really enjoyed this set. And how awesome calling it Caturdays. Super clever!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 7:39:00 PM
Thank you ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 4:39:00 PM
Caturdays are seven days a week of course. I enjoyed your poem Debbie.My cat Tailsman ,Tally as I call him thinks you are a great Writer. I agree with him.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 8:07:00 PM
Thank you ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 11:02:00 AM
I find your poem very cute Debbie~*~SKAT
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 7:51:00 PM
thank you ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 6:16:00 AM
Those little precious indoor cats and kittens love those birds, squirrels, rats, mice, chipmonks, and they will eat snakes also..Enjoyed your very creative and unique work about the two kinds of cats..The house cat and bobcat which are very much kin...Thanks for stopping by..Those snakes are scary. Some are deadly even though now there is antivenom which can save lives but not every time..Sara
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 5:47:00 PM
thank you Sara ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 4:45:00 AM
yes encapsulates a puddy cat...
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 4:48:00 PM
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Date: 4/12/2013 3:05:00 AM
- Let the cat out .... it comes back soon. - A sweet poem Debbie! - Have a relaxed and nice weekend my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 4:11:00 PM
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Date: 4/12/2013 1:42:00 AM
Oh This is adorable. I really loved it.
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 4:11:00 PM
thank you ;}
Date: 4/12/2013 12:55:00 AM
what a lovely poem.. enjoyed so much ..as always <3 wish you a blessing weekend my sweet sista Debbie <3
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/12/2013 3:51:00 PM
thank you SK ;}