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' Carpenter's Rule ... ' 54th Senryu

‘ Carpenter’s Rule … ’ 54th Senryu ‘ HE ’ … Is Not A Fool Can Not Use GOD, Like A Tool ... Carpenter’s Gold-Rule

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 1:26:00 PM

You are on a roll, MoonBee. On a senryu journey across the Soup. How delightful your writings are. Love to you. Dane Ann (Soupmail)

John Freeman

Date: 11/25/2009 8:40:00 PM

Only one rule so golden, but seems so hard for humanity to learn, how to measure with. No matter, it will still be there after all is said and done. Some will have to learn later. Sincere, Love, Moses

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/25/2009 8:22:00 PM

very cool! soup-mail!

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 5:34:00 PM

We tend to take Him for granted very often! Thought-provoking! Peace and love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2009 4:25:00 PM

Interesting thoughts on the about "He" and the carpenter's golden-rule. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara