Aphrodite's Desire

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"Love Me Like You Mean It"
9/20/20 For Gregory R. Barden's Rithimus Divisa 6 Poetry Contest

I’m your Aphrodite; handle me with care. Let soft fingers linger in my golden locks of hair. You are my Adonis; in the same way that I worship you, ignite romance’s spark in me anew! 9/20/20

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2020 7:52:00 AM

congrats..SK

John Watt

Date: 9/25/2020 11:38:00 PM

Love the mythology allusions and the soft romantic overtures. Well done, and congrats on your win with Greg, my dear friend!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/25/2020 7:14:00 PM

It's a pleasure to return with a big round of applause, Andrea. Congratulations, on your wonderful win with this romantic piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/25/2020 7:01:00 PM

Very romantic, Andrea. Congrats on your win! :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/25/2020 6:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Rithimus Divisa 6 Premiere Poetry Contest, Buddy - I appreciate you taking the time to enter. This was a contest full of quality, and the placements came down to very small things, indeed - what a joy to read such poetic cream! Blessings, My Friend! :o)

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/21/2020 6:13:00 AM

A powerful write...Open clear...

Silent One

Date: 9/20/2020 10:33:00 AM

Ooh la la..... very romantic.... i wonder if there will be a part two lol

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/20/2020 10:30:00 AM

So beautiful, Andrea. A tender romantic plea and a great choice for the contest. Best wishes for a win, my friend.. ~Susan