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Alone

sad alone by myself with no partner blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/3/2019 3:42:00 PM
Alkas I feel deeply for this poem, but want you to tread lightly on what I've found. To look within oneself is to truly laugh. Expressions you've expressed before; my definition of a pair... A pear is a wonderful fruit. Sometimes dry but try a Japanese or Asian pear is simply juicy enjoy the syrup my friend.
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:53:00 AM
Happy to read Alkas. And happy I'm sure you are. But for me as if I dare say it as a po...writer of words. I always write truth because I feel that my mind has much to say about my life.
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Date: 5/3/2019 6:38:00 PM
Jeff, My friend, each one has the pair that suits ... I had a pair that I lost (married 2 times) and now I have another woman who is my current pair. I do not like pear much ... As for syrup, I am diabetic. Poet is a pretender ... pretends to suffer, but is very happy ... That's all ... do not think too much and it is all right salute alkas.  
Date: 5/3/2019 3:41:00 PM
- I feel this says all about loneliness ... excellent written, A.P. - Sun :)
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Date: 5/3/2019 6:40:00 PM
Sunshine, loneliness of course, but only for poetry purpose...i ' am very happy...remember a poet is always a pretender... salute alkas.
Date: 5/3/2019 1:42:00 PM
A perfect image in a few words; well penned.
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Date: 5/3/2019 6:55:00 PM
Tank you for the comment dear poet, salute alkas.
Date: 5/3/2019 9:03:00 AM
Potent penning!
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Date: 5/3/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you my dear... poten comment. Salute alkas
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Date: 5/3/2019 11:31:00 AM
Hi, Maureen thank you for your magic comment ! Have a good day, salute alkas.

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