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A Hot Night

A HOT NIGHT Last Friday our temperature rose To 39 degrees, I could not sleep, My husband likes aircon, I like fans, At this stage neither of us, Had any plans, Began to count sheep, Off came my nightie, The throw-over dropped on The wooden floor, Our back stable door Open, no security problem here, We have nothing to fear! But mosquitoes galore, Sprayed peaceful sleep around The room, However benign, still has a Strange fume, Windows open throughout The house, This estate is so quiet, we Would hear a mouse! Got up to get more iced water, No dressing gown Just my panties, This place is in the country Out of town, Went back to bed, Picked up a book, Read a while Switched off the side lamp and Then tried to sleep, By now wide awake, Even counting sheep, No longer helped, Hey Sweetheart, I said To Hubby, feel like A cold shower, Mmmmm says he, Didn’t even look At the hour! Dropped my scanty Pantie off, Climbed in and soaked, And played and played And played, went back to Bed, cuddled and both Slept like a log, Even the dog, Crept out of the room, Just Hubby and I all alone, Was no work the next day, It was Saturday, Slept in and played some more, John Lennon and Yoko Omo Had nothing on us, Glad we moved here, Feels ever more sensuous Than before, Was served breakfast In bed, Bacon and eggs, fresh farm Butter, and home-made bread!

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Date: 12/5/2019 4:21:00 AM
What a wonderful poem, Jennifer. I am going to re-read it, because it felt so good!
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:19:00 AM
Hubby did raise his eyebrows, but knows me fore the dare devil I am - happy you are going to re-read! Hugs and blessings dear Caren, Jennifer.
Date: 12/4/2019 2:37:00 PM
Nice one Jenny, certainly no cool affair painted here. A fine write indeed full of passion and emotion. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thanks for a great comment Gordon, on such a hot night, surely no cool affair coul be contemplated! Hugs and blessings my friend. Jennifer.
Date: 12/4/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thought this would be a steamy one from the title, and... you didn't disappoint. Now what color were those panties? LOL. ~ Clothed Urbanite
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:13:00 AM
Not all secrets can be revealed, that would be censored! Glad you enjoyed! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/4/2019 11:28:00 AM
Wow and wow! This is humdinger I would not have the courage to pen. Great poem with breakfast at the end.nobody can out do you! Panagiota xxx
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:10:00 AM
Panagiota mou , the Greek hot blood will always rise with the temperature - that is always a certainty. Glad you enjoyed my friend, a little bold, but guess that's me! Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
Date: 12/4/2019 10:45:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, an excellent, sensual write from a golden pen. The temperature rose and by the end of the read, it was cold shower time, funny that, for it is freezing here, in Scotland. I loved the content of this write. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:07:00 AM
Lol, Lol -a cold shower in cold temperatures, - ouch! An awesome comment my friend, thank-you! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 12/3/2019 2:30:00 PM
Really enjoyed this candid, uninhibited, witty and yet sensual poem, Jenny! I think that Anne-Lise already said all I had in mind:) Lucky you being served breakfast in bed:) ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/5/2019 8:03:00 AM
We only had one option Paul to keep cool, the intense heat did not abate so a cold shower was an only option! Thank you for a great comment my friend. Ward regards, and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/3/2019 9:06:00 AM
scanty Pantie off, hehe... romantic... bacon and eggs my fav... home made bread... is there any other kind? Excellent from beginning to the lovely lovely end. Ann
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:59:00 AM
Ann, the heat did not let up at all - so intense, all we could do was to take a cold shower! Take care dear friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/2/2019 10:12:00 PM
A fun read, and lots of fun to write, I'm certain ; ) This turned out beautifully, Jennifer - Happy to have stopped by!
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:56:00 AM
Hello there, Hello there, glad you stopped by too - really enjoy your poetry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/2/2019 2:38:00 PM
Sounds like a very romantic encounter Jennifer, could do with some heat here, heavy frost here today. Glad you're all settled ok now. Tomu
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:52:00 AM
Tom my good friend, always such a pillar of support, you are really appreciated. Kinda settled people are wary, maybe they have read my naughty poems! Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/2/2019 1:49:00 PM
Excellent poem! We could experience the heat and then the sensuous freedom and release! Very good!!
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thank-you for the comment and the visit - so kind of you to stop by. Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/2/2019 1:34:00 PM
I am assuming that is 39 degrees Celsius? Sounds like a wonderfully hot romantic evening to me. This poem made me smile.
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:47:00 AM
It was such a hot night and the temperature did not want to budge, so what else but a cold shower! Thanks Chris for your continued support. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 12/2/2019 1:27:00 PM
- It started with 39 degrees, Jenny .... but the temperature rose higher and higher beyond the hours of the night ... :))) - A warm and romantic night ... lovely written :) - Good to hear you are living in a safe place now - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2019 7:45:00 AM
Much safer my friend, but the owners o the cottages are all very young, some our age - glad you enjoyed my naughty poem! Hugs and blessings soul sister, Jenny.

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