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A Full Moon Oil

sky cracked hunchback moon spreads her bed window soft glow staging chasing nighttime lifetime coming going sleep tears sleep fears brim full hollow

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Beej Simrov

Date: 7/17/2025 9:52:00 PM

So it's lovely but I am not familiar with the Footie form, enlighten me?

Paige Hind
Date: 7/17/2025 10:36:00 PM

Each stanza must have four syllables. Two at top, two at bottom, and this can continue on and on until you've finished with your ideas. :)

Sara Baker

Date: 7/17/2025 5:31:00 PM

loved the flow and the imagery. You definitely have skill with this form, nicely done!

Anne Winter

Date: 7/15/2025 7:47:00 AM

Wow, beautiful just absolutely gorgeous! Wow! Love this!

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/14/2025 10:45:00 PM

playing rhymes is delicious, enjoyed

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/14/2025 8:02:00 AM

Loved the imagery of the moon spreading her bed.... and the soft glow. This was a serene write. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2025 6:39:00 PM

of course your footles chime lovely charms, paige!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 7/12/2025 11:59:00 PM

Gosh, what a creatively done footle this is, my dear Paige! I'm just so surprised always, the talent that you possess of weaving different forms ever so effortlessly and also, showing the artistic nature of your heart through your words. Beyond impressive! I love the theme here, as I adore everything about the moon! "moon spreads her bed","sleep tears sleep fears" So much you've said and reflected in these few lines, absolutely exquisite. A FAVE for me, indeed,keep sharing and writing always :)

Danny Derden

Date: 7/12/2025 6:31:00 PM

Your poem is hauntingly beautiful—each fragment evokes raw emotion and imagery with stunning precision. The minimalism adds depth, making “A Full Moon Oil” feel quietly profound. Keep writing.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/12/2025 6:09:00 PM

First 4 lines my favorite!