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You are young You are young and beautiful ... The blush on your chin ... Like a rose that is in the bud. Smooth the skin and hair fluttering in the wind ... Smile on your mouth ... A roseknupp to make stand Yet you are young Your journey has just begun A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/23/2014 7:40:00 PM

really sweet beautiful image anne lise excellent pen god bless dear friend smiling congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2014 2:08:00 AM

- Thank you for visit and comments on my "old" poem, Liam - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/21/2014 8:57:00 PM

Love, love this piece of poetry. It's so perfectly penned. It paints an awesome picture! Bravo!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/22/2014 2:45:00 AM

- Thank you for visit and comments on my poem, Suzanne - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 10/20/2014 10:00:00 AM

I'd love to see this young beauty you paints so well. congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/20/2014 11:18:00 AM

- Thank you for visit and comments on my poem, Daver - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/24/2013 12:22:00 AM

such a nice poem Anne Lise ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/24/2013 4:03:00 AM

- Thank you for visit and comments on my poem, Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/5/2013 4:26:00 AM

Why, thanks, Anne-Lise :) Awesome write. I love it! Have an imaginative, great fun weekend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2013 11:36:00 AM

Thank you for visit and comments on my poem, Toquyen. - oxox Anne-Lise

Lena Filatova

Date: 1/19/2012 10:15:00 AM

Its a great portrait of youth itself :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2012 10:49:00 AM

Thank you for reading it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/8/2012 10:40:00 AM

Anne--this is so Victorian like. Innocence of youth is a grand topic..have a great weekend, poet. When things slow down more, I will sit and read a mass sum of your work all in one day. It will be Anne day! Gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/8/2012 10:52:00 AM

Thank you ....."Anne day"-super day,welcome!oxox love Anne-Lise.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/14/2011 4:23:00 PM

sweet verse, Anne! jimbo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2011 10:26:00 AM

Thank you jimbo - welcome back.OXOX Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 11:48:00 AM

Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Anne Lise. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/14/2011 12:26:00 PM

Thank you Carol. And merry Christmas to you. OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Debra Squyres

Date: 12/9/2011 8:45:00 PM

Nice...remembers having rosey cheeks at one point in my life. lol I enjoyed this !!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2011 6:51:00 AM

We all have been young and beautiful,I think. Thank you ! OXOX Anne-Lise

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/9/2011 12:34:00 PM

Good times indeed.... Your poetry is a breath of fresh air... love it.... luv xoxo Michael

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/10/2011 6:49:00 AM

Thank you Michal ! OXOX Hugs from Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2011 12:43:00 PM

Thank you for reeding my poem Michael,I love reeding yours poem (I reed some every day)YOU ARE GOOD !!! OXOX Love from Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 12:54:00 PM

Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Anne Lise. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2011 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Carol,come back every day if you want to. OXOX Hug from Anne-Lise

Dawn Mclaughlin

Date: 12/8/2011 2:36:00 AM

Love this Anne.. Thank you for your kind comment on my Poem xx Dawnie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2011 10:37:00 AM

Welcom back and thank you. OXOX Anne-Lise

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/7/2011 7:05:00 PM

Ahhh...Yes,the good old days. :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2011 10:39:00 AM

.........Sweet sixteen . . . . OXOX Anne-Lise

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/7/2011 3:11:00 PM

* "I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS GENTLE TENDER VERSE * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL ANNE-LISE * SHE SOUNDS SOOO BLESSED & BEAUTIFUL * YOUR LOVELY BRUSHES HER HEART AMID THE SOFTEST OF PASTEL HUES * I SHALL FAVOURITE THIS WONDERFUL TREASURE * TIS SOOO BEAUTIFUL * THANK YOU * FOR BRINGING HAPPINES UNTO MY OWN HEART WITH YOUR LOVELY VISIT * JOYFUL HOLIDAYS MY DEAR * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2011 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Sarah OXOX Anne-Lise

Diane Christian

Date: 12/7/2011 2:42:00 PM

aww this one is sweet God bless u

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/8/2011 10:42:00 AM

Once upon a time..... sweet sixteen...... OXOX Anne-Lise