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You are a jeweled gift sparkling diamond rock temple One of thousand in the world touched petal by petal Skies above true blue wrapped cotton white emotions Arches over our earthly plains east to west one circle Inside silk ribbon feelings tie the knot perfectly With wings of a swan bound unto you eternally In you who crowns the heart with passions ignite magic When the sky was falling into the promised land chants Carnation of a flower deeply stirring dewdrops rose In light of the rainbow mountains shone glitter dust Loving you morning and night never goes out of fashion Amor helped to ignite flames that burn purely with love A Collaborated Poem Anne-Lise Andresen and Liam Mc Daid 07.09.2016 (unrhymed couplets) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 1/25/2017 10:52:00 AM

Given a 7, compliments on the structure, coupled with enchanting imagery. I can see Liam's magical pen in this.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/23/2016 4:53:00 PM

A beautiful piece by both of you. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2016 6:39:00 AM

- Phyllis, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - I'm happy that you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/11/2016 9:05:00 PM

beautiful as always , sweet lady with her writing companion.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/12/2016 2:41:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/10/2016 3:18:00 PM

Another lovely collaboration, Anne-Lise & Liam! Swans and romance often tend to go hand in hand. Well done! Warm regards to one and hugs to the other:) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/11/2016 5:12:00 AM

- Pail, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - I'm happy that you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/9/2016 10:10:00 PM

Lovely couplet and a beautiful collaboration ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/10/2016 6:00:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visit and nice comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/8/2016 7:04:00 AM

A nice romantic poem ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2016 7:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/8/2016 1:23:00 AM

Great collab once again, Anne-lise and Liam:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2016 1:30:00 AM

- Jo, thanks for the comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/7/2016 9:30:00 PM

"Loving you never goes out of fashion" What a lovely line. A perfect ending to a most lovely write. You both write wonderfully together. It's always a pleasant read when you two collaborate Anne Lise and Liam:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2016 1:15:00 AM

- Daniel, I'm happy that you enjoy it :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/7/2016 4:03:00 PM

Anne-Lise and Liam, This is indeed a very beautiful couplet. Congratulations on the smooth synergy of efforts in making this one a fabulous write. Most Excellent!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2016 1:12:00 AM

- I'm happy that you enjoy it, Gary :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2016 3:15:00 PM

A lovely way to do unrhymed couplets. with a fabulous partner!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2016 1:09:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/7/2016 2:52:00 PM

What a beautiful romantic poem Anne Lise and Liam such stunning imagery you write so wonderfully together HUGS Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2016 1:08:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/7/2016 2:13:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam !:))Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each! Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2016 2:24:00 PM

- I'm happy that you enjoy it, Dorian :) - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/7/2016 2:12:00 PM

Swans mate for life I believe and they exude romance. We have only black swans here in Hawaii, to my knowledge, and they are so beautiful. Just like this lovely collaboration! Fine writing between the two of you! 7 ; )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2016 2:22:00 PM

- Love that lasts a lifetime, it's beautiful Connie - I've never seen black swans, only white :) - Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/7/2016 1:47:00 PM

thank you deeply anne lise for the pleasure of melting pens together wishing you a blessing of a day pal love how this all came together pal

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2016 2:19:00 PM

- Always a pleasure, Liam - Thanks to you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2016 1:28:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, You and Liam have penned a beautiful collaboration . It is so romantic and I enjoyed it from start to finish. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2016 2:18:00 PM

- Many thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)