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- Precious Gold Drops -

Light falls down from the summer's sheer clouds For the future no gates remain locked, spread your wings A bird in the sky your soul flies free intoxicating spirits Upon loves beautiful ray of light drunken wavers Not dwelling on the past and using energy on what went wrong Happy people get feelings out done and dusted Awakening flames dancing butterflies flutter Warm inner wings a heart takes glorious flight Brilliance of a rainbow seducing thoughts softly whisper Life's worth it's weight in gold, why hesitate ? Inside the mirrors always aglow Beauty's in the eyes forever one bows and beholds A co write written by L. Mcdaid and A -L Andresen

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/23/2015 8:24:00 PM

So glad to have read your verse this evening keep up the good work! Light & Love

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/15/2015 10:25:00 PM

Now this is golden, so beautiful, even I was wishing this was a tale of leprechauns leading me to that famed pot of Irish gold!!!! great collab you two!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2015 4:22:00 PM

Precious indeed.You were born to collaborate on beautiful poetry. Caught you just as I was going off!!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 10:29:00 AM

ah so sweet of you andrea anne lise has the golden ink in her quill wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt appreciated

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/5/2015 3:39:00 AM

beautiful imagery Liam and Anne Lise.. ! wow!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 10:27:00 AM

thank you kindly olive for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 10:24:00 AM

thank you so kindly for the wonderful comment olive deeply appreciated dear friend

Kamran Rashid

Date: 3/3/2015 4:47:00 PM

I JUST WONDER how can some let their minds and soulz go and think beyond limits#owsm write,,..loved reading and learned alot..#ty iliam fr oll gems..

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 7:33:00 AM

just by letting the barriers fall we are all brothers and sisters thank you truly for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated kamran deeply appreciated dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/3/2015 10:48:00 AM

You, both, keep mesmerizing me with your writing which makes mine seem so mediocre! A seven to both of you dear Liam and Anne-Lise!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 7:16:00 AM

ah thank you demetrios dear pal for the heartfelt very beautiful comment i am sure anne lise will agree bowled me over bless you always dear friend

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/1/2015 11:14:00 PM

Warm inner wings a heart takes glorious flight for L and AL

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 6:45:00 AM

ah rajat thank you kindly dear pal for the sweet very beautiful comment bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/1/2015 9:23:00 PM

Hello Liam and Anne-Lise! Another very beautiful amazing love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!A very sweet uplifting, dreamy poem filled of love, dreams, and light.A very huge 7 +++ to each!A very passionate romantic poem filled of warm visions for a better tomorrow to be held very close to ones heart.Smiling.I enjoyed it!love it!Awesome!Your pen is mighty golden!To me you're the best Liam!Very beautiful gentle and sweet!I hope all your dreams and wishes come true Liam and that one day you're very happy.Wishing you all the best!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love and hugs! xoxox D. ^O^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 6:44:00 AM

thank you kindly dorian dear friend for the very beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2015 4:43:00 PM

Anne Lise and Liam another stunning write from your golden pens - it flows so beautifully with wonderful imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx 7 xxx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 6:42:00 AM

ahh thank you deeply jan not on line as much these days wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2015 4:40:00 PM

- Another beautiful poem in my collection co write with you Liam - Thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 6:39:00 AM

it sure is anne lise always a pleasure writing with you thank you deeply dear pal wishing you a beautiful day

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/1/2015 3:58:00 PM

awakening flames dancing butterflies flutter, oh Liam you have such spectacular lines, pleasure to read you :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/8/2015 3:26:00 PM

casarah thank you so kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment dear friend wishing you a blessed sunday pal