- New Winter -

*
                                              Winter
                                           Dark, cold
                                  Snowy, whirling, shining
                        * Frozen, snowflakes, snowman,melts *
                                    Birth, buds, beautiful
                                           Music, lyrics
                                               Spring
                                                  *





08.11.2014
Sponsor: Regina Riddle
Contest Name Diamante Poem
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- Thank you for my 2nd place :)

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Date: 11/23/2014 10:06:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win, Anne Lise! A lovely diamante...hugs, Rhonda
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2014 3:27:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rhonda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/21/2014 9:51:00 AM
I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2014 1:46:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/20/2014 11:01:00 PM
this one is REALLY Nice, love that blending into spring . Congrats.
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Date: 11/21/2014 2:13:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2014 3:01:00 PM
Nicely crafted Anne Lise, and a New Winter is upon us, James :) :)
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:00:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, James - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/19/2014 3:32:00 AM
I felt as though I was touching a diamond piece in winter, after reading your piece. Showers of applause to your WIN Anne- Lise! ^_^
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:00:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Teddy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2014 10:32:00 AM
Sorry my massage Comes a bit late,I'm just somehow busy here; congrats on this merited win Anne...huggs
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:58:00 AM
- Never too late - thanks for the congrats and visit,Kayod5 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/18/2014 10:31:00 AM
magical melody that deserves a shining win,anne.. my cheery congrats to you!
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:57:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2014 12:33:00 PM
Awesome one on this Diamante Anne Lise. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 12:47:00 PM
- Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" dear Phyllis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2014 9:22:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, I love the subject for your Diamante poem and how winter so gently slides into spring. Nice wording. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/17/2014 11:55:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Sandra - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2014 6:25:00 AM
Beautiful Diamante Anne...Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/17/2014 7:21:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Joseph - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/17/2014 6:19:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise, Beautiful, well structured, meaningful diamante. You always find a way to spice things up. Congratulations on a great win. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/17/2014 7:20:00 AM
- Thanks for the congrats and lovely visit, Earl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2014 4:34:00 PM
Winter is ok once you know that spring is on the way!! Congrats on your deserved high placing. /x/ paul
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:25:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2014 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this lovely Diamante Anne Lise
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Date: 11/16/2014 11:24:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Brenda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2014 2:56:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:17:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats, Jan - I will read the winning list tomorrow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2014 4:58:00 AM
Wonderfully appropriate seeing as how we had our first snow yesterday and I can see my breath while I walk my dog. I appreciate this work.
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Date: 11/16/2014 5:03:00 AM
- I have a little puppy who has not seen snow yet .... will be interesting :))) - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" Ingvar - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2014 3:45:00 AM
Schneikies! Anne Lise! Also wanted to concur....i am looking out my condo window at 3" of newly fallen snow and single-digit temperatures! jimbo
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:54:00 AM
- Winter is here .... but no snow yet :) - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" James - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/16/2014 3:41:00 AM
Love the snowflakes in your shaped poem, Anne Lise! Nice work! jimbo
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Date: 11/16/2014 4:55:00 AM
- Thank you :))
Date: 11/15/2014 12:55:00 AM
Beautiful theme you chose Anne Lise ;) xx hope your weekend is a great one..
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:54:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Wilma - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2014 11:31:00 AM
Sounds as though you are getting ready to miss winter before it's even begun.
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Date: 11/13/2014 11:43:00 AM
- I dream of spring all year :))) - The winters are arrived to Norway :) - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Scott - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/13/2014 8:59:00 AM
Beautiful words, beautiful snowflake.
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Date: 11/13/2014 9:21:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond",Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/11/2014 6:47:00 AM
:) hi, anne!
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Date: 11/11/2014 7:59:00 AM
:)) hi, Nette!
Date: 11/10/2014 5:43:00 PM
Very good poem, nice visions of winter, add some Christmas lights for some spice.
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:03:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond",Arty ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/10/2014 4:56:00 PM
You'll have it quicker than us Anne Lise, but mild I hope, James :)
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:01:00 AM
- Here in Western Norway no snow yet, but cold at night - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" James! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/10/2014 4:09:00 PM
this is wonderful. But to let you know, I think the middle line, your last two nouns have to be related to spring!!
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Date: 11/11/2014 3:02:00 AM
- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/11/2014 2:26:00 AM
Example /Diammante poem Line 1: Winter = 1 NOUN-A Line 2: Rainy, cold = 2 ADJECTIVES-A Line 3: Skiing, skating, sledding = 3 GERUNDS-A (verb + -ing) Line 4: Mountains, wind, breeze, ocean = 2 NOUNS-A + 2 NOUNS-B Line 5: Swimming, surfing, scuba diving = 3 GERUNDS-B (verb + -ing) Line 6: Sunny, hot = 2 ADJECTIVES-B Line 7: Summer = 1 NOUN-B
Date: 11/10/2014 2:19:00 PM
Beautiful diamante. I liked how you threw in music and lyrics to describe spring - very fitting for the season.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2014 3:01:00 PM
- Timothy, thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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