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- New Winter -

* Winter Dark, cold Snowy, whirling, shining * Frozen, snowflakes, snowman,melts * Birth, buds, beautiful Music, lyrics Spring * 08.11.2014 Sponsor: Regina Riddle Contest Name Diamante Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Thank you for my 2nd place :)

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/23/2014 10:06:00 PM

Congrats on a wonderful win, Anne Lise! A lovely diamante...hugs, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/24/2014 3:27:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rhonda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2014 9:51:00 AM

I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 1:46:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2014 11:01:00 PM

this one is REALLY Nice, love that blending into spring . Congrats.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/21/2014 2:13:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/19/2014 3:01:00 PM

Nicely crafted Anne Lise, and a New Winter is upon us, James :) :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2014 4:00:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, James - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/19/2014 3:32:00 AM

I felt as though I was touching a diamond piece in winter, after reading your piece. Showers of applause to your WIN Anne- Lise! ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/19/2014 4:00:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Teddy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/18/2014 10:32:00 AM

Sorry my massage Comes a bit late,I'm just somehow busy here; congrats on this merited win Anne...huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2014 11:58:00 AM

- Never too late - thanks for the congrats and visit,Kayod5 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/18/2014 10:31:00 AM

magical melody that deserves a shining win,anne.. my cheery congrats to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/18/2014 11:57:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/17/2014 12:33:00 PM

Awesome one on this Diamante Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 12:47:00 PM

- Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" dear Phyllis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/17/2014 9:22:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, I love the subject for your Diamante poem and how winter so gently slides into spring. Nice wording. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 11:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Sandra - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 11/17/2014 6:25:00 AM

Beautiful Diamante Anne...Congrats on your win

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 7:21:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Joseph - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/17/2014 6:19:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, Beautiful, well structured, meaningful diamante. You always find a way to spice things up. Congratulations on a great win. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/17/2014 7:20:00 AM

- Thanks for the congrats and lovely visit, Earl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/16/2014 4:34:00 PM

Winter is ok once you know that spring is on the way!! Congrats on your deserved high placing. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 11:25:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/16/2014 4:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win for this lovely Diamante Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 11:24:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats and visit, Brenda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/16/2014 2:56:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 4:17:00 PM

- Thanks for the congrats, Jan - I will read the winning list tomorrow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ingvar Thorisdottir

Date: 11/16/2014 4:58:00 AM

Wonderfully appropriate seeing as how we had our first snow yesterday and I can see my breath while I walk my dog. I appreciate this work.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 5:03:00 AM

- I have a little puppy who has not seen snow yet .... will be interesting :))) - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" Ingvar - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/16/2014 3:45:00 AM

Schneikies! Anne Lise! Also wanted to concur....i am looking out my condo window at 3" of newly fallen snow and single-digit temperatures! jimbo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 4:54:00 AM

- Winter is here .... but no snow yet :) - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" James - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/16/2014 3:41:00 AM

Love the snowflakes in your shaped poem, Anne Lise! Nice work! jimbo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/16/2014 4:55:00 AM

- Thank you :))

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/15/2014 12:55:00 AM

Beautiful theme you chose Anne Lise ;) xx hope your weekend is a great one..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/15/2014 6:54:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Wilma - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/13/2014 11:31:00 AM

Sounds as though you are getting ready to miss winter before it's even begun.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2014 11:43:00 AM

- I dream of spring all year :))) - The winters are arrived to Norway :) - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Scott - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/13/2014 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful words, beautiful snowflake.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2014 9:21:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond",Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/11/2014 6:47:00 AM

:) hi, anne!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2014 7:59:00 AM

:)) hi, Nette!

Arty Rico Jones

Date: 11/10/2014 5:43:00 PM

Very good poem, nice visions of winter, add some Christmas lights for some spice.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2014 3:03:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond",Arty ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/10/2014 4:56:00 PM

You'll have it quicker than us Anne Lise, but mild I hope, James :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2014 3:01:00 AM

- Here in Western Norway no snow yet, but cold at night - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" James! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2014 4:09:00 PM

this is wonderful. But to let you know, I think the middle line, your last two nouns have to be related to spring!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2014 3:02:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/11/2014 2:26:00 AM

Example /Diammante poem Line 1: Winter = 1 NOUN-A Line 2: Rainy, cold = 2 ADJECTIVES-A Line 3: Skiing, skating, sledding = 3 GERUNDS-A (verb + -ing) Line 4: Mountains, wind, breeze, ocean = 2 NOUNS-A + 2 NOUNS-B Line 5: Swimming, surfing, scuba diving = 3 GERUNDS-B (verb + -ing) Line 6: Sunny, hot = 2 ADJECTIVES-B Line 7: Summer = 1 NOUN-B

Timothy Hicks

Date: 11/10/2014 2:19:00 PM

Beautiful diamante. I liked how you threw in music and lyrics to describe spring - very fitting for the season.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/10/2014 3:01:00 PM

- Timothy, thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)