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- Haiku X 34 - Rainy Days -

The rain splashing down murmur of the mountain streams Autumn will come now With overnight rain Grows higher every minute Dry feet wear high boots Contest Name: Rainy Days Sponsor: Leonora Galinta - Thanks for my 1st place in the contest, Leonora :) 12.09.2014 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/17/2014 1:46:00 AM

You know me, Anne. I'm a sucker for the haiku and these ones are good. Here in Idaho we have lots of murmuring mountain streams. And they are never slow but very fast!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/17/2014 2:23:00 AM

..... And my haiku has become better with practice :))) - Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Timothy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/12/2014 3:06:00 PM

Excellent haiku with beautiful imagery! Congratulations on a wonderful win for a wonderful write! Best regards. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/13/2014 4:20:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Mohn

Date: 10/10/2014 6:25:00 PM

love your haiku Anne Lise...congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/11/2014 5:25:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/10/2014 3:11:00 PM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your 1st place win for your delightful Haiku. Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 3:14:00 PM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Sandra :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/10/2014 10:21:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anne

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 11:34:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats,Joseph :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/10/2014 9:16:00 AM

Showers of applause to your winning piece Anne Lise! I love your haiku! ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 9:52:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats,Teddy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 10/10/2014 8:53:00 AM

Terse and lovely. Congrats, . A.l.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 8:55:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Jag. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/10/2014 7:49:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations on your winning poem Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 8:00:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Brenda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/10/2014 6:09:00 AM

Nicely penned haiku with fine images, Anne, congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 7:40:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Dr.Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2014 4:34:00 AM

absolutely delightful haikus Anne lise many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 7:40:00 AM

- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2014 2:51:00 AM

Congratulations my dearest poet friend Anne Lise. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2014 3:31:00 AM

- Thanks for my 1st place in the contest, dear friend Leonora :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/24/2014 1:51:00 PM

looking out the windows its raining funny enough beautifully penned dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/24/2014 2:29:00 PM

- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/18/2014 8:13:00 AM

The only thing better than a rainy day is a rainy day in autumn. You captured them both.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/18/2014 8:59:00 AM

- Dear Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/14/2014 4:39:00 PM

Very nice haiku suits Anne Lise! Love the imagery! :) be back to read you some more soon. Cheers! xxxxxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 6:46:00 PM

- Dorian, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/13/2014 9:29:00 PM

Well done Haiku Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/14/2014 5:08:00 AM

- Brenda, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 9/13/2014 12:32:00 PM

wohoooo!!!how i love to enjoy the freedom it brings.. on rainy days... very well written, my friend Anne .. ^_^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 3:46:00 PM

- My friend AiyaH, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/13/2014 1:37:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful one. Enjoyed . Tfs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:24:00 AM

- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/13/2014 1:23:00 AM

Lovely haikus Anne Lise! U mean flooding rains n that's why high boots ??

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:23:00 AM

- REALLY MUCH RAIN..... Yes, flooding rains !!!! - Dr. Upma, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/13/2014 12:19:00 AM

These are lovely entries for the contest Anne Lise. I love the rain and the fresh scent it leaves when it stops. I love how you express the rain having a voice.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:26:00 AM

- The rain has a voice .... music, Connie :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/12/2014 11:50:00 PM

I love the sound of rain but not being out in it. Nice haiku Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:27:00 AM

- Get out and dance in the rain, dear Phyllis :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/12/2014 7:12:00 PM

great one, anne lise! i enjoyed...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:28:00 AM

- Ilene, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/12/2014 5:26:00 PM

Wonderful girl, smile a lot this weekend :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:29:00 AM

:) ) ) - Casarah, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/12/2014 4:32:00 PM

Happy weekend :) hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:19:00 AM

- Happy weekend, Tim :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/12/2014 3:20:00 PM

Classical rhythm, I feel here. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:29:00 AM

- Dear bl, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/12/2014 1:50:00 PM

I love this paired haiku. I hope you rank high in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2014 5:30:00 AM

- Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)