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Arnab Mitra

Date: 6/4/2013 1:20:00 AM

Concise and deadly sharp.. A good piece

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/4/2013 1:36:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Arnab. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2013 2:02:00 PM

again, your metaphors glide and deeply express this tragic scene with such agility, anne.. enjoyed passing through your past poems... sheer delight!.. happy day!..:) hugggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/28/2013 1:46:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/13/2013 1:05:00 PM

That was such a sad day indeed and I think you captured one of the victims' stories well here-- thank you for passing by my poem... I hope all is well with all of you and belated Happy Mother's Day hugs to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/13/2013 2:48:00 PM

E.P, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Katherine Braithwaite

Date: 5/9/2013 1:38:00 PM

A fine poem

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/9/2013 2:26:00 PM

Katherine, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/2/2013 12:16:00 AM

That captures the brutality of these terrorist. Contrasting the most fragile image with the most brutal...well done SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/2/2013 11:26:00 AM

Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Suzanne. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/1/2013 11:24:00 PM

Tragedy expressed in so few words! Excellent!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2013 11:35:00 PM

Demetrios, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 5/1/2013 3:42:00 PM

that's was a sad event, lets hope it won't happen again,thanks for sharing it,God bless you,Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2013 11:17:00 PM

Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 5/1/2013 10:01:00 AM

Sad event...so very sad and cruel. Your haiku says so much ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/1/2013 10:28:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/30/2013 12:45:00 PM

Good haiku here Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 12:49:00 PM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Kash. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/30/2013 8:39:00 AM

The affect of bombing nicely depicted with the example of one lovely ballerina. You always use golden words with beautiful imagery. Thanks....., loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 9:22:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Emily Schaffer

Date: 4/30/2013 5:30:00 AM

I'm sure they think it's harmless, but now-a-days everything's about having fun but they're taking it too far.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 6:22:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to respond Emily. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Emily Schaffer
Date: 4/30/2013 5:31:00 AM

Btw, this is a response to you're comment.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/30/2013 3:02:00 AM

Hit right to the core, Anne-Lise. I love your poetry. You are truly gifted at gripping the reader. A true tearjerker this is...something we can relate to emotionally what with the Boston bombing...etc... Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 3:08:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sallam Yassin

Date: 4/30/2013 2:53:00 AM

ugly face of terrorist distortion of beauty nice haiku Anne thanks to share

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 3:07:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Sallam. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/30/2013 12:34:00 AM

Excellent. Simple and deep haiku. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 1:14:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Ravi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2013 7:31:00 PM

Very deep Anne, not a pleasant memory on the topic... always~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 1:14:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason

Date: 4/29/2013 3:57:00 PM

I''m doing great anne :) how are you? everything here has been going pretty good, just tons and tons of end of the school work, it is horrible but we got to pass these tests haha

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 1:12:00 AM

It is is sure go fine - just do your best - Good Luck !!! Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2013 2:37:00 PM

still touchin gme as i re-read this again and again, anne... have a great day!...:) hugggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/30/2013 1:16:00 AM

I have many others to choose. / / Thanks :) - oxox// Anne-Lise :)

Emily Schaffer

Date: 4/29/2013 10:02:00 AM

I really enjoyed this haiku, seeing as there are so many at my school already making fun of it. I can't understand how they could be so heartless and it was nice to see that someone else felt differently :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 10:08:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Emily. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 4/29/2013 7:01:00 AM

Yes, her swan song. Enjoyed. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 7:07:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Daver. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shining Bright

Date: 4/29/2013 6:35:00 AM

Short and POWERFUL! Great!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 6:57:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Persian. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/29/2013 6:27:00 AM

Darn...you really hit hard with this one, Anne...well done!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 6:56:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Caleb. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/29/2013 3:12:00 AM

Such evil, poetically penned. This really got to me too. Wrote a haiku about it at the time "Tempered Grace"-- thanks for always stopping by my poems xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 5:11:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 4/28/2013 8:54:00 PM

Sooo sad. I abhor violence in any form. Nice haiku, Anne-Lise. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 1:07:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Delysia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 8:31:00 PM

such a sad one. Thanks for thinking of Boston, Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 1:06:00 AM

- Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ale A A

Date: 4/28/2013 5:32:00 PM

These few words are so heart wrenching and lovely at the same time. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/29/2013 1:06:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Abigale. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)