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' ... For the Old Men ... ' (Or It Ain'T Over Yet)

He Thought, ‘Cause He Was Old And the Other Guy, was Just ‘Sprung’ That He didn’t have a Chance To Hold His Own, Against The ‘Young-Un’ … And In Spite of His Many Years … Worn-Well, Like Battle-Scars The Boy, Wet, Behind The Ears Challenged Him For Love, Thru War … … The Rival, Dressed In Handsome-Glory And showed His Young-Man’s Strength And Polished Up, His Manners, Solely … To Flatter, The Lady at Length … So … The Old Man … Stopped His Visits To The Woman of His Dreams His Last Chance … and He’d Missed It … Due To Failing Eyesight and Self-Esteem But, the Object of Their Desire A Woman, Fully-Grown One of Beauty and Hidden Fire Already Chose, What Her Heart – Known So, She Went to See The Old Man Her Senior, by Twenty-Years And She Took Him, By the Hands And This: Is What He Hears: “ … Hon, I’m Just Like Fine-Wine Aged and Mellow, Taste Real Good I Flow in a Smooth-Line … and I Thought You Understood … I Already Been In The Barrel I Already Reached My Peak My Vintage, Ain’t Just Alcohol You Know, I’m Warm and Sweet … and I Need A Man To Hold Me Like A Decanter, Strong and Bright … Crystal-Clear, Around Me And Sparkling-Eyes, in the Light I Need Him, Cut-To-Perfection With Many Facets, At Each Turn And Fluted with Affection So, When He Pours … He Still Yearns Now, An Old Decanter, Like This Takes Time, and Design To Make It Doesn’t Spill A Kiss Or Fall-Down, Shatter and Break … Its Been Tested, for Its Value Adds Worth, to Any Room I Give It, Its Due … It’s a Genuine Heirloom ! Now, These Words, Go-Down Pretty You May Think, ‘Don’t Mean A Thing’ But, I Need A Dose of Maturity More Jump, Than Grape-Juice Brings …” - - - - - - The Woman, Said Her Sincere Words Then She Kissed His Weathered Cheek And Wondered If He’d Heard When He Still, Didn’t Speak … … Then He Gently Grabbed Her Close As It Finally, Soaked In … … ‘It’s Me, She Chose ! …’ … The Old-Man, Gave A Boyish-Grin ! And He Held Her, Like A Decanter Holds The Finest, Best Wine … Caressed and Prized and Hugged Her And Softly Whispered … “Mine !” As She Swirled Perfumed Nectar And Shy Drops Upon His Lips An Intoxicating Sampler … … The Old Man, Took A Sip … Next Time, When He Saw His Rival He Knew, He’d Have Some Fun As He Waited For His Arrival … To Tell Him, ‘You’re Not Cut-Out For This One, Son …

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Date: 11/14/2009 5:14:00 PM
What an extraordinary write! Very well-written with truth and some humor! I love this also, MoonBee! Peace and love, audrey. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems! God bless!
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Date: 11/14/2009 11:02:00 AM
The aged wine an't just shine. This you put into it's proper perspective MoonBee. Without a deeper soul connection, no true wine every comes to perfection. The so called new wine, the Jesus kind, is new only to the fleshly mind, for it has been inside it's core(Sacred Heart)Sence the very beginning of time, the ancient of age perfection, awaiting human inspection. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/13/2009 5:55:00 AM
Moon Bee, I'm smiling out loud, reminiscing, and loving the way you captured mature love. This is a great write full of understanding... and maturity. Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 11/13/2009 4:11:00 AM
Nicely written tribute to the older mature men in our world who have learned from life what life is really all about. Keep writing. Thanks for your comments on my writings. Sara
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