Fabulous Fun Footles - Spring

snow gone on lawn gets warm no harm A bloom will loom nice breeze in trees birds sing in spring .. 3/19/17

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John Michaels

Date: 4/2/2017 4:56:00 AM

Just swinging by to congratulate you on your win! Regards.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/1/2017 9:05:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your winning write: -)Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2017 6:25:00 PM

A fabulous seasonal string of footles - I found the rhyming slightly off on the second set and did check with rhymezone too:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 4/1/2017 4:35:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Jan

John Michaels

Date: 3/25/2017 12:49:00 PM

I especially liked the last two stanzas! Good luck in the contest!

Judy Ball

Date: 3/21/2017 5:29:00 PM

Snow gone, lots of ice. Slippery when wet. Great job here Joseph. You made me smile when I thought of my yard full of ice. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2017 9:17:00 AM

... Snow gone ... but no spring - Lovely written, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/20/2017 9:49:00 PM

Hi Joseph, This is a nice entry for the contest. It compliments the season really well. You painted a lovely picture with words. It looks beautiful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -) Alexis PS, Happy first day of spring!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2017 6:26:00 PM

this is fantastic, Joseph!! Oh, I have to hurry up on mine!!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/20/2017 4:25:00 AM

I hear the birds now

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/20/2017 3:42:00 AM

These were delightful Joseph! 7 ; ) Happy spring!