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- a Little Bit of Heaven -

Such a romantic place on a beach in Monte Carlo Simple little things in life catching one's breath Moonlight glinting of waves breaking off a white sandy beach Faraway thoughts brown eyes crying in an ocean dream song Spell of romance makes one forget the sense of anything Silent whispers echoes binding our chain together tides speak Do you remember the white doves that followed us along the beaches Each link in your arm magic walks closer feelings sing inside a joyous choir enchants Nature nurtured by the desire to fulfill dreams makes time stop Holds deep sea emotions a galloping white steed races home in warm waves kiss The natures mesmerizing perfume of fragrant flowers Where destiny paints the joy in butterflies dance on a warm loving breeze Such is the passion in the depths of ones soul Jewels needle vision flies without wings heaven sings in a spiral coloring rainbows No barriers closed no reasons withstand The midnight moon shades blue embraced one shadow two become one dream A co write written by Liam Mcdaid and Anne-Lise Andresen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/6/2015 11:43:00 AM
Kudos to you both. What wonderful collaborative harmony displayed in this awesome, romantic piece! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Pandita.
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:06:00 PM
So beautifully written Iiam and Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/1/2015 6:57:00 AM
- Where does our next journey go :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:23:00 PM
yet another classic romantic write from two awesome pens - great write Anne lise and Liam:-) a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:07:00 PM
Hello Liam and Anne Lise! Very romantic and dreamy pens, my dearest friends Liam and Anne Lise! Very nice! A huge 7 +++ for each! Yes, Monaco is a nice destination to fly to any day.Enjoy!A very sweet poem filled of love promises dreams and hopes to be held very close to ones heart.smiling. This one spills romance,the sweetness of love all over.This is a little bit of heaven, no doubt! Love it! The perfect getaway!Very beautiful golden pens! Have a lovely weekend! God bless you both always! :) Love and hugs!xoxxox D.^O^
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Date: 1/31/2015 6:53:00 PM
Dear Liam, a great work here a fine collaboration between two excellent poets, and thanks for your comment also, glad I stopped by tonight and you have a great evening, cheri
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Date: 1/31/2015 6:25:00 PM
A stunning collaboration from two beautiful poets. Awesome :)
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:33:00 PM
Ahh!! Way to go with a collaboration..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:18:00 AM
Nice
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/5/2015 6:22:00 PM
thank you karl for the beautiful comment
Date: 1/31/2015 6:55:00 AM
Okay you two now I'm itching to go to Monte Carlo... Only seen it in the movies....sounds wonderful
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/5/2015 6:21:00 PM
smiling tim i only seen it in the movies myself anne lise her pen drew the beauty pal thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you

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