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The Last Flicker

The circle is starting to come together, Like a storm you feel it approach and you brace for uncertain weather. You know that your flame which once burned so bright, Will be extinguished like a star that shoots across the night. You just hope that you made a difference and were the best that you could be, That you led no one astray and was a good influence for all around to see. And when your candle makes its final flicker, You’ll be ready to go without a qualm and face this day with just a snicker. You can never have things finished or completely in order, No matter how hard you try it only gets harder. My motto used to be “always try to leave things a little better than you found them,” And I hope when I’m gone people will say, “Gosh I'm going to sure miss him.” Or maybe he was a good guy or he was a true friend, That is how I’d like to be remembered and thought about in the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/31/2008 3:39:00 PM
Hi Ron. hopefully we will create our own legacy through our deeds as well as our writing. Good write. Vince
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Date: 7/27/2008 6:01:00 PM
What an uplifing reflection. If everyone tried to make things better, what a wonderful world this would be. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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Date: 7/24/2008 3:37:00 PM
Oh my friend, this is so beautiful, great introspection and filled with so much yearning. You are very special. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/23/2008 6:59:00 PM
You know Ronald I think people will speak of you for you seem to be a honest man - I hope that time is far off - blessings
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Date: 7/23/2008 5:00:00 PM
Ones kindness, and goodness, these are the things that will be remembered, and will bring a smile to the ones left behind...you my friend are all the above, may you have a long happy, loving life...Always, Christy
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Date: 7/23/2008 2:28:00 PM
Hello Ron This is just how I'll remember you...in the end. But you still have lots of life and love in you. I really enjoyed this poem for it is full of inspiration and heartfelt truth. What we leave behind truly is our legacy in life....Stay well. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/23/2008 2:09:00 PM
I loved this poem. I think we all would like to leave such a legacy behind. What could be better than to be remembered as a kind soul? Fondly, Carrie
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