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The Journal

All alone she sat and cried, The hurt she felt she could not hide. The man she loved was sleeping around, And what hurt most he made a journal in which she found. She had trusted him with all her heart, Then finds out he had been cheating from the start. Revenge and getting even were now what was controlling her mind, Hurt and ashamed for being so gullible, and being so blind. She thought about all the wasted years of being his wife, And how this one little book could destroy a life. Their children now are almost grown, And she wondered if either of them had ever known. She waited up a little past four, When she heard him fumbling with the door. As he walked in she flipped on the light, And the guilt on his face he could not hide this very night. Trash bags and suitcases lined her living room floor, She said I want you out of this house and never again darken my door. He said have you gone nuts are you completely insane, She just held up his journal and said this should explain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/18/2009 4:23:00 PM
Oh la...why that sneaky peter cheater! This tells a story that many can relate to, Ronald. Strange how the guilty try to fence with denials...that guy didn't have a crooked leg left to stand on. Oh well...wishing you and yours the best! Mikki
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Date: 3/13/2009 1:30:00 PM
A creative and realistic portrait of the ultimate betrayal here. Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Well done!!! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 3/13/2009 10:56:00 AM
Ronald, you relate well the sense of betrayal. How gullible we are sometimes! I'm glad she left him! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2009 7:49:00 PM
Well nuff said. Sooner or later it'll bite you in the butt. Very honest write Ron.
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Date: 3/10/2009 2:35:00 PM
I just went through this with a niece of mine so much hurt,the grass isn't alwys greener on the other side of the fence they have to find out themselves,God Bless,Marie
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Date: 3/10/2009 1:14:00 PM
They will always get caught....sooner or later!! She's lucky to find out sooner than later!! Good story ! Carrie
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Date: 3/10/2009 11:52:00 AM
BUSTED!!!!!!!! I bet he got that deer in the headlights look.....This was a fantastic write, and you never know, it may give someone the strength to do what needs to be done. KICK THEM OUT......This is going into my favorites right now.....you already are in my favorites...F/F always, Christy
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