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I hope I don't insult anyone.. The story is about a hound wanting to play, while the cat wants its space.

The hound with his tongue hanging out Of his mouth and his tail wagging about So fast and furiously the cat thought that the hound looked like a lout. Giving the hound a stare, the cat turned upside down, and continued to flout. Give the hound his royal **** facing south, The hound’s retreat became a rout 8/26/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2017 6:15:00 PM

HA, with the added picture, it's very cool!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/27/2017 6:03:00 PM

No insult, just beautiful...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/1/2017 8:37:00 PM

a lout from the south give this kitty poem a kiss on the mouth. Always.... Pashang

Eve Roper
Date: 8/27/2017 6:19:00 PM

Thank you, Pahang :) ~*

Joseph May

Date: 8/27/2017 4:57:00 PM

Lol..Nicely done Eve

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/27/2017 2:40:00 PM

Hi Eve, How could this piece of fun insult anyone Eve? Loved it. I think the hound should have known better myself. Loved the humour. Hugs....Mike. XX

Eve Roper
Date: 8/27/2017 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Mike, you are always so kind and so encouraging .. never stop Hugs ~*