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UNICORN

Like the UNICORN At times I fear I am the mysterious of all animals Like the Unicorn, I myself do not feel real My inner beauty is the only thing to conceal I am my own mythological creature Roaming souls with a little will power to heal Ages of my forgotten tear Like the Unicorns a prophecy so unclear I compare your beauty to be the eyes of stare I am a magical power so rare Absorbing the energy of the sun into a spear I appear like the wild horse I have no feelings of real existence, my life with no compare Embracing all memories to disappear Wasting away absorbing nature's life GONE! Haunted down by a hunters knife Thousands of wolves hungry to eat me alive Fallen legends and myth Pondering in a past life who I am I feel a touch upon my bones Am I he the Unicorn A horse with one horn Unlike the Unicorn who fell to exist My suffering really does exist How I wish everything was fake To be like you hiding upon the mist Like the Unicorn who is a horse with no horn Like a nobody when my life slips into the abyss A depth of wishing to have never been born With the vision of Heaven’s Realm with a Unicorn twist Like the Unicorn who only exist in Legends and Myth. I come and go like a blown kiss Shedding tears feeling all alone I want to be like the Unicorn who are bound to roam Take me away from this wonders of thorns Give me a magic Medallion to free myself from the pits Infatuated with the gorgeous Unicorn A passion among beauty is where I exist by:

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/19/2016 12:21:00 PM
Dear Linda If I could give you a bouquet of roses for a poem it would be for this beauty, it's just simply a magical experience thanks for sharing it with me, an remember the virture of the unicorns true magic lives within all of us the poets expectually, cheri
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:26:00 PM
it's a fantasy of mine to be a unicorn. LOL thanks for the win ROSE
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Date: 6/29/2015 8:22:00 AM
Unicorn are such a magical creatures a 7 for a wonderful verse .congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:24:00 AM
of course you are a winner. love ya
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Date: 6/27/2015 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations dear Linda on a magnificent win! Superb piece with superb imagery! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
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Date: 6/27/2015 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations Linda, I enjoyed your winning poem.
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Date: 10/6/2013 2:57:00 PM
The magical unicorn, That's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/31/2013 8:47:00 AM
mystical beauty.Just wanted to send good wishes your way.Hope you have a good weekend.
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Date: 2/18/2013 7:03:00 AM
Hello my dearest sis! How are you? Hope you're doing great! Stopping here on soup for a while before going to bed. I'm so glad to read again this marvelous Unicorn poem and a masterpiece of yours! Thank you so much again for sharing! Good night here and good/great day to you and your love ones there! Sending you my warmest hugs! I miss you sis! love always and forever, Leonora
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Date: 8/14/2012 8:24:00 AM
Hi PD Seems we have a liking for Unicorns .. I just posted one... I have a series of Unicorn prose will post morer latter.. I am new to site and was trying to figure how to reply to your nice comments on my work ... so I thought this would be best love what you wrote and I too wil be following you r work as well also like the coal story very much Thank you again for reading and commenting on my work TK
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:00:00 PM
Irma, since you are not answering your soupmails, I will just write this far away on your cute unicorn poem. I wanted to commend you for commenting nicely on Deb's recent blog. That was very nice of you. To show you are above all of it. I think people are kind of getting out of hand now, and it just needs to be laid to rest. Kash is even talking about leaving (though I think he has other reasons) and I sure hope he stays on. I just knew you would feel our encouragement and stay around. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:33:00 PM
Smile ~ "Beautiful Poe Again &, 'Thank You' &, You Too, Have 'A Beautiful Wonderful' Evening 'Dear, Beautiful Sydney LeeAnn,' Love 'Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "Sweet Dreams;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/31/2010 7:15:00 AM
Very touching poem and story.....I felt your words and understood them well....Thank you..
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Date: 8/24/2010 12:26:00 AM
Dear P.D writen with your heart in your hand ... one for my favourites ... smile love Jayne x x x
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:43:00 AM
Lots of deep thoughts, P D. I wish now and then I could see the beautiful animal out my Magic Window. It runs in my mind it no longer exhists because it was so stuck on it's self it would not return to the Ark in time to depart with Noah. I don't like to think of it that way. Great work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for your kind words on my poetry.
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:17:00 PM
A majestic poem, this is a favourite.
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Date: 8/12/2010 2:21:00 PM
Hi p.d. Thank you so much for your very kind and encouraging comment on my poem "Waves." This poem of your is a real Beauty. For you made a Unicorn seem even more beautiful and lovlier than it already is! Truly Awesome! Love, Susan
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:20:00 PM
Smile ~ "Extremely Beautiful Poem, Dear Precious & Lovely Sidney LeeAnn" ~ These are the types of poetics verses dear lady that I truly love from "Your Beautiful Brush; 'A Masterpiece of A Warm Beating Heart; Precious!!!'" ~ Smile, And, "Thank You Dear;" look forward to seeing "You" again ~ This gem here; one for the faves; as truly beautiful as it truly is!!! ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Night Dear Sidney LeeAnn;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:25:00 PM
Fine mythological poem! Let's hope we can see unicorns in the future! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/2/2010 12:48:00 PM
Is this real Kool B.oy
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Date: 8/1/2010 3:47:00 PM
Some have said they cannot post new contests and some have said they are having problems with their current contests... any of this affecting u P.D. my BBF? appreciate my placement in your Unicorn contest ... and glad u enjoy my writings... its such a joy to share with u my friend.. let me know if any problems...Rick is contacting P.S. Staff to let them know he cannot post a new one and Nate had some issues with his contest staying put but now its back again OK.. luv..
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Date: 8/1/2010 1:03:00 AM
LoVED IT this 1 IS REALLY CHARMING like U .-SKAT
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:45:00 PM
so much fantasy in here. so this is who you are on the inside, rather than the outside that people no always look at first. some do though. a beautiful write too, Sid. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/31/2010 4:56:00 PM
Quite an interesting use of metaphor to portray yourself and your aspirations. It is clear though that you seek to be free, as we all do really. Very well written and quite creative. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on mine today. Caroline.
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:31:00 AM
This is pretty darned moving to be honest, there's a touch of the writer in this piece. The Unicorn appearing as a theme I believe has opened a door into the life of the writer. PD > thank you so much for your kind words on my poems >> James,x
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