Unicorn

Like the UNICORN

At times I fear I am the mysterious of all animals
Like the Unicorn, I myself do not feel real
My inner beauty is the only thing to conceal
I am my own mythological creature
Roaming souls with a little will power to heal
 
Ages of my forgotten tear
Like the Unicorns  a prophecy so unclear
I compare your beauty to be the eyes of stare
I am a magical power so rare
Absorbing the energy of the sun into a spear
I appear like the wild horse
I have no feelings of real existence, my life with no compare
Embracing all memories to disappear

Wasting away absorbing nature's life
GONE!
Haunted down by a hunters knife
Thousands of wolves hungry to eat me alive

Fallen legends and myth
Pondering in a past life who I am
I feel a  touch upon my bones
Am I he the Unicorn 
A horse with one horn
Unlike the Unicorn who fell to exist
My suffering  really does exist
How I wish everything was fake
To be like you hiding upon the mist

Like the Unicorn who is a horse with no horn
Like a nobody when my life slips into the abyss 
A depth of wishing to have never been  born
With the vision of  Heaven’s Realm with a Unicorn twist

Like the Unicorn who only exist in Legends and Myth.
I come and go like a blown kiss
Shedding tears feeling all alone
I want to be like the Unicorn who are bound to roam
Take me away from this wonders of thorns
Give me a magic Medallion to free myself from the pits
Infatuated with the gorgeous Unicorn
A passion among beauty is where I exist

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dunn Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 12:21 PM
Dear Linda If I could give you a bouquet of roses for a poem it would be for this beauty, it's just simply a magical experience thanks for sharing it with me, an remember the virture of the unicorns true magic lives within all of us the poets expectually, cheri
A   Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 6:26 PM
it's a fantasy of mine to be a unicorn. LOL thanks for the win ROSE
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Unicorn are such a magical creatures a 7 for a wonderful verse .congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
A  Avatar
June 28, 2015 at 12:24 AM
of course you are a winner. love ya
Sietesantos Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations dear Linda on a magnificent win! Superb piece with superb imagery! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita
Lamoureux Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations Linda, I enjoyed your winning poem.
Goller Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 2:57 PM
The magical unicorn, That's a very heartfelt expressed story poem, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Hugs!Erich
Bono Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 8:47 AM
mystical beauty.Just wanted to send good wishes your way.Hope you have a good weekend.
Gasun Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Hello my dearest sis! How are you? Hope you're doing great! Stopping here on soup for a while before going to bed. I'm so glad to read again this marvelous Unicorn poem and a masterpiece of yours! Thank you so much again for sharing! Good night here and good/great day to you and your love ones there! Sending you my warmest hugs! I miss you sis! love always and forever, Leonora
Eissler Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Hi PD Seems we have a liking for Unicorns .. I just posted one... I have a series of Unicorn prose will post morer latter.. I am new to site and was trying to figure how to reply to your nice comments on my work ... so I thought this would be best love what you wrote and I too wil be following you r work as well also like the coal story very much Thank you again for reading and commenting on my work TK
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 11:00 PM
Irma, since you are not answering your soupmails, I will just write this far away on your cute unicorn poem. I wanted to commend you for commenting nicely on Deb's recent blog. That was very nice of you. To show you are above all of it. I think people are kind of getting out of hand now, and it just needs to be laid to rest. Kash is even talking about leaving (though I think he has other reasons) and I sure hope he stays on. I just knew you would feel our encouragement and stay around. Luv, Andrea
Rhinem Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 7:33 PM
Smile ~ "Beautiful Poe Again &, 'Thank You' &, You Too, Have 'A Beautiful Wonderful' Evening 'Dear, Beautiful Sydney LeeAnn,' Love 'Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "Sweet Dreams;" Bye!:) ~
Ventura Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Very touching poem and story.....I felt your words and understood them well....Thank you..
Eggins Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 12:26 AM
Dear P.D writen with your heart in your hand ... one for my favourites ... smile love Jayne x x x
Beer Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:43 AM
Lots of deep thoughts, P D. I wish now and then I could see the beautiful animal out my Magic Window. It runs in my mind it no longer exhists because it was so stuck on it's self it would not return to the Ark in time to depart with Noah. I don't like to think of it that way. Great work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for your kind words on my poetry.
Smith Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:17 PM
A majestic poem, this is a favourite.
Mills Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 2:21 PM
Hi p.d. Thank you so much for your very kind and encouraging comment on my poem "Waves." This poem of your is a real Beauty. For you made a Unicorn seem even more beautiful and lovlier than it already is! Truly Awesome! Love, Susan
Rhinem Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 7:20 PM
Smile ~ "Extremely Beautiful Poem, Dear Precious & Lovely Sidney LeeAnn" ~ These are the types of poetics verses dear lady that I truly love from "Your Beautiful Brush; 'A Masterpiece of A Warm Beating Heart; Precious!!!'" ~ Smile, And, "Thank You Dear;" look forward to seeing "You" again ~ This gem here; one for the faves; as truly beautiful as it truly is!!! ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Night Dear Sidney LeeAnn;" Bye!:) ~
Anish Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 6:25 PM
Fine mythological poem! Let's hope we can see unicorns in the future! Yours Matthew Anish
Boy Avatar
August 2, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Is this real Kool B.oy
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Some have said they cannot post new contests and some have said they are having problems with their current contests... any of this affecting u P.D. my BBF? appreciate my placement in your Unicorn contest ... and glad u enjoy my writings... its such a joy to share with u my friend.. let me know if any problems...Rick is contacting P.S. Staff to let them know he cannot post a new one and Nate had some issues with his contest staying put but now its back again OK.. luv..
A  Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 1:03 AM
LoVED IT this 1 IS REALLY CHARMING like U .-SKAT
Chachere Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 9:45 PM
so much fantasy in here. so this is who you are on the inside, rather than the outside that people no always look at first. some do though. a beautiful write too, Sid. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Delacroix Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Quite an interesting use of metaphor to portray yourself and your aspirations. It is clear though that you seek to be free, as we all do really. Very well written and quite creative. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on mine today. Caroline.
Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 11:31 AM
This is pretty darned moving to be honest, there's a touch of the writer in this piece. The Unicorn appearing as a theme I believe has opened a door into the life of the writer. PD > thank you so much for your kind words on my poems >> James,x
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