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River's Bend

I am sorry they found you,you were at rest where you wanted to be ,surely they jest? But no it's true they found your remains taking you away from your watery domain in the river's bend,but I know you will always be there where your soul did descend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/5/2011 5:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Aleta. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 12/4/2011 11:05:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more.
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Date: 12/4/2011 5:07:00 AM
Enjoyed your work..Did you brother die in an accident on the river?..I sure that his soul ascended up to the Master..Did he love the river and nature?...Sara
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Date: 12/3/2011 5:04:00 PM
This poem is for my beloved Brother who drowned in the river we loved.
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