. F.T.W.(Oil)

.       F.T.W.
F.ree  T.he  W.aves
f.REE  t.HE  w.AVES

F.ree T.he W.aves!!!
Is what they say,,
Got my self some true tales
About the world today.
Oil job site fails.
Poor Sea World has to pay.
I found many black sea shells
Oil got in their way.
I wanna claw my nails.
On B.P.for turning our sand to clay
I can sit and give details
How they ruin our ocean bay
Instead I'm sending mean E-MAIL's
Expressing anger for their oily display.
How their stupidities drop our sales.
I hope they choke while eating a sea buffet
I hope someone feeds them sting-ray tails
As they drink coffee at there sea side cafe.
Everything sooner or later prevails
And ocean life will once again find a way.

God send them rain hit them with heavy hail
It's to late for B.P.to pray..
2 months of a  black grave trail
((LOL)), B.P.you angered the US.A.
Getting off easy with no jail
That does not make things okay.
I will not wish you all to go to hell
After making the ocean a bigger body of dead prey
Your clean up time is slower than a sea snail
Many uncalled dead seagulls are found in your oily decay
Funny how the president takes the heat of your bail.
You screwed our blue ocean water to a stream of black and grey.

An oil site ran by a higher percent of males
Oh well what can you expect and say.
With the world in the way of oil spills.
Is like B.P.oil's is saying F.T.W.anyway.
While we the protesters say, F.ree T.he W.hales!!!
F.T.W.=free the whales!!!!!

=(contest)=

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/26/2014 1:06:00 PM
PD This is such a powerfully deep poem full of heart and truth. Your voice is clearly displayed with the honesty you are creating. Thank you for the great comment on my Lifeline poem.
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Date: 1/22/2013 12:37:00 AM
your avatar is fun but I prefer your face! I HAVE to get to bed right now but it was my only time to get caught up on comments. Joe occupied my time all weekend. He is without work again. SIGH.
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:28:00 PM
PD, let me know if Soup ever responded to you. Who did you want to give that lifetime membership to anyway?? Thanks for all your comments!
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Date: 1/4/2013 10:18:00 AM
2013. BP did a lot more than American companies did when they had spills. I was angry at the spill but these guys went out of their way to make it right. Oil companies (campaign donors) need to be responsible for their actions.
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Date: 9/3/2010 12:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win on this contest, PD. Your message here will definitely clean the bad intentions of those who are still on this kind of business. Great job here. Appreciate your kind words to my featured poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/20/2010 7:51:00 AM
WoW! Love going to the Gulf coast and this is very close to my heart, thanks for commenting on my work, yes we feel like saying FTW.....
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Date: 8/16/2010 4:15:00 PM
My Dear Friend--- I hate to say it but back in my day FTW stood for something completely different so I expected this to be about something completely different-LOL- Anytime someone such as yourself voices an expression about this subject it is a good thing--We the people need to speak out more! Best Wishes to You and Yours My Friend~ Peace~James
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with such a great write. I could rant with you, but you have already done that very nicely. FTW, Jerri
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on our BIG win in taking first place in this contest! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:32:00 AM
Look at you go girl! I loved this one from the start. Congrats on your no. one, big dog, queen of the hill, numeral uno, ichiban, whale of a win Chatter Bug:)! BONUS QUESTIONS: Who's name and picture appears at the top of the W.B.I.'s (Whale Bureau Investigation) most feared and most dangerous list...A) the Inuits. B) The Japanese. C) B.P. D.) Global warming i.e. Mankind in general?
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Date: 8/13/2010 3:52:00 AM
Congrats PD well deserved win! Great Slam
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations P D on your win in S K A T 's contest "Oil Spilled Out Anger ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:44:00 AM
Totally love this one PD - Congrat's on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:01:00 AM
Congrats P.D my BBF on your first place win in Irma's great contest.. with this exceptional write and super win for a spectacular slam poem.. enjoy your sweet victory .. your BBF..with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:31:00 PM
whales are so innocent., it's be a shame and sorry not to save them.who knows if they will be though..right. i think anyone who cares has every right to express their anger about this. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/26/2010 12:04:00 AM
PD. thanks again for that win. You know what? You already have over ten haiku in your contest. Why did you say until Aug 30. It's gonna be filled up maybe within a day or two from now!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:14:00 PM
Great message in your poem p.d,much enjoyed!p.d.d re your comment on mine'How am i?',lets say I'm alive,meaning I'm o.k,hope you are too W.B.
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Date: 7/24/2010 8:42:00 AM
wow.
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Date: 7/24/2010 5:55:00 AM
Just came back from my vacation:D Nice to see you've been busy writing! The oil spill got me so angry, too! 'Poor sea world has to pay'...unfortunately...Good luck in the contest with this exciting work! Emily
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:14:00 AM
Wow!!! Great piece of work A message indeed. I love to read your poems. Thanks for sharing. :)
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:21:00 AM
great write with a lot of obvious passion in your word play!..niice job!
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Date: 7/22/2010 11:35:00 PM
PD. finally I have time to actually sit and enjoy poems. This was very good. I just know it will do well in the contest.Luv andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:12:00 PM
I had a dream that the Japanese were being hunted down and slaughtered by a bunch of sperm whales, and then I woke up in a Japanese bath house! Good luck in the contest Chatter Bug! I just posted my first blog, you're welcomed to visit.
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Date: 7/22/2010 4:17:00 PM
many are angered by the oil spill and rightly so. Your expressed your anger well. Thanks for commenting on my oil poem. I did wanted to enter it in the contest, but my computer wasn't working too good and it would not submit anything. I had to write my poem on the oil spill as I saw the people holding hands along the beach in such sorrow. I had to write their memories in a poem . Glad you liked it so. Barbara
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Date: 7/22/2010 2:00:00 PM
i get it. john
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