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Endangered Species

Girl in red, a dress Pleated down to her knees, skips Down the lonely street. Man in black beret Sunshades set on face, striding Down the narrow street. Girl turns, sees this chap Hurries her steps, man does so too Girl runs, man runs too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/19/2012 6:12:00 PM
Senryu for sure...What's the rest of the story? lol...nice! Cynthia
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Date: 8/18/2012 9:22:00 PM
Scary scenario - great visual poetry. I think they are senryu - they are not about nature. Keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/18/2012 9:29:00 PM
Mathew it is a matter of the English Haiku, vs the traditional Japanese. Love
Date: 8/16/2012 6:04:00 PM
Love this set of haiku! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:47:00 PM
Hey, I like this set. The endangerment of innocence.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/15/2012 9:03:00 PM
Thanks again, Andrea.
Date: 8/15/2012 9:56:00 AM
This is realistic and relevant,Sherese.I think I had sent you a soupmail a week before.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/15/2012 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Fabiyas.
Date: 8/14/2012 10:17:00 AM
nice haiku Sherese...love ...Joseph
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Date: 8/14/2012 5:54:00 AM
check out Girls,its a warning for women,hope you like it
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Date: 8/14/2012 5:51:00 AM
run girl or better yet get out the pepper spray lol,great write Sherese,hope its not Bolt running her down lol
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/14/2012 5:55:00 AM
Thanks, Terry. Appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems.
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Sherese Gooden
Date: 8/14/2012 5:54:00 AM
LOL, Rich.
Date: 8/14/2012 2:36:00 AM
Nice set about scary things! Terry
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