Best Man

Well versed rehearsed Best man began He joked provoked Each word was slurred Blah blah faux pas Defamed and shamed The bride soon cried Now crushed she blushed Red faced disgraced Without a doubt He put his foot Inside his snide Wide scouth loud mouth Not quite contrite Ashamed he blamed His botch on Scotch. 3/ 21/ 2018.

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/4/2018 4:12:00 PM

This is an excellent string of Footles, George...very worthy of its high placement! Merited a first place.... Congratulations // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2018 8:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, George, excellent footle. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2018 12:45:00 PM

Absolutely priceless humour George, personally I'd have given this a top spot its superb!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 9:36:00 AM

Funny footle, George. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2018 12:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, George :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Shaw

Date: 3/30/2018 4:20:00 AM

Now I remember, why I didn't have a best man. Very clever string of footles, not my favourite form, I must admit, but enjoyed reading yours, kindest regards, Kevin