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Mickey and Malory

Their paths had crossed yet neither was sure of the direction that one or both should go.Each wanted to see where the path would lead but neither could ever know.They were young and something like love lingered in the air.Each believed something great was to be but both ideas were not to be shared.Separate they were good together they were great.Each pushed the other but young still were they.They lived life and soaked in every moment of every day.They each had flaws which both adored,on the good days,which were many,you couldn't be bored.Just being with the other is all one would need,then the money,with a twinge of greed. Who knows when exactly the paths turned away...One morning the other was gone neither to be seen to this day.What made these two as one so great was the way they pushed the other toward their goals.Each so passionate with every ounce of their soul. For the longest it worked yet secrets were kept and new dreams weren't expressed.The beginning of the end,a failed test.Both were wrong but both wanted so much from life. This was the friend,the lover and if he would have let her in, then the wife. She believed in him and he's just now proving her right. It took plenty of ''work''from before day to after night. He was correct about her as well so maybe they did their jobs in the end The worst part though,she isn't his wife,his lover nor his friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/30/2016 2:57:00 PM
Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7
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Jai Bankson
Date: 6/9/2016 6:49:00 PM
Thank you for that..Pray all is well!
Date: 4/5/2016 7:02:00 AM
An excellent narrative which keeps the reader wanting more. There was so much promise to begin with...but not quite enough to avoid the (inevitable?) split! // paul
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Jai Bankson
Date: 4/8/2016 12:39:00 AM
Such is life...Thank you very much Justin
Date: 3/31/2016 7:35:00 PM
Jai, wow, sometimes one must go before everything gets deep. I'm referring to the part, where one woke up and realized it was time to follow them goals. awesome poem. LINDA
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Jai Bankson
Date: 4/5/2016 12:32:00 AM
I finally get an awesome from you...Thank you kindly Mam...I kinda fixed my p.c....if I had a tablet I would never go to work...maybe your on to something Doc
Date: 3/31/2016 2:46:00 PM
A sad ending to a promising beginning! Well told story.
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Jai Bankson
Date: 4/5/2016 12:27:00 AM
Hey stranger..Thank you very much!