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A Battered Woman

A Battered Woman * When God made woman, he gave her one of mans ribs which made her part of him in spirit and soul. So men you are to be as kind to your wife as yourselves because they are part of you. ~ If you are beating on your wife, then what will she have to give you in return? When you change her character you’ll no longer have the wife you married. Does that still make you feel like a man? ~ You men, you know who I am talking about, the ones who never hit but use words to do their dirty work for them. They’re just as vicious as their foil, only they dig deeper and are much more hurtful. ~ Yep, these guys go where none has gone before they’ll destroy her families cause they’ve got to keep her from them; he’s done his evil by calling her all types of angry names and tearing her down in front of their friends. ~ He’ll leave scars that run deeper in her which might take an entire lifetime to heal ... Since these guys have done their worst; now it is our turn, we’ll with patience and understanding will try to help repair the damage done ….. ~ Then we’ll reap the benefit of having a most loving heart-filled woman melting into our caring and loving hands. All because one man did not take care of his most prized treasure, his wife… ~ Steve L. Siegel May 16, 2010

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Date: 2/5/2017 6:11:00 AM
So well put, brilliant write, adding this to my favourites.
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Date: 2/3/2017 1:20:00 PM
Hi Steven. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 6/14/2010 6:11:00 PM
I enjoyed this write, thanks for sharing. Gavin.
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Date: 6/12/2010 12:49:00 PM
This write was very loving for the females, a bond we had thanks to Adam for wanting a mate now here we are and men take advantage, you put it in words so wonderfuly, enjoyed your write very much today... P.D.
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