My Father

As sweet and loving as he is He can be equaly strict. I love him as he is The days that have gone past. We have both learned much. But i think it is safe to say... Dad it is time to stop being that way And to think what you will to for me and my brother To guide us on our way

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/8/2010 9:11:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Aunika. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2010 9:18:00 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all..as this delight tonight... a nice write ..enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..