Fall

FALL windy crimson pale Leaves swimming gladly on fast running cascades Comfort my eyes at sad dusks "Moon awaits peaceful snowy nights" ____________________ Entered in Bite size poetry contest (13tg Sept, 2020) Clarity Pyramid

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2020 10:22:00 AM

Pagunda, please forgive me, your poem in the contest was breathtaking, congratulations my dear friend - I would NEVER leave you out, I must have been blinded for a moment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/24/2020 2:21:00 PM

So nice of you Jennifer... Love you :*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 1:50:00 PM

this is utterly gorgeous and so interesting the imagery with "crimson pale" I have to fave this one!!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/20/2020 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Trying different poetry forms lately, and I am loving them. These contests are really helpful. They actual make you try a different form. Thank you for stopping by :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 12:16:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Paghunda ... autumn is here and it is cold and windy - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/20/2020 1:58:00 PM

Thanks

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 11:53:00 AM

Wonderful write Paghunda, Congrats on your win..

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/20/2020 1:57:00 PM

O' just checked contest result, was placed 2nd. Thanks a lot

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2020 9:06:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go ..I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for stopping by my work. Sara

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/20/2020 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Sara :*

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/18/2020 9:07:00 PM

"Leaves swimming" This is a beautiful thought. You paint such vivid images with your words. Fall is one of my favorite seasons. :) Brandy

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/20/2020 1:56:00 PM

Mine as well... How schway is that :l

Michael Tor

Date: 9/14/2020 4:47:00 PM

Wonderful entree for the contest Paghunda. Be well my friend...

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/18/2020 12:06:00 PM

Thank you

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 9/14/2020 8:38:00 AM

This is a wonderfully written pyramid on Fall, Paghunda!! Best wishes for a great win in the contest!!

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/18/2020 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Newton

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/14/2020 3:24:00 AM

Zahid, thank-you for your comment the other day...I do like what you have written here. There is a lot of mixed emotion, which to me is the sign of a high level of thought and perception. TTYL.

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/18/2020 12:06:00 PM

Welcome

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2020 5:16:00 PM

Your fall poem is beautiful in both imagery and form, Paghunda. A fantastic last line! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Paghunda Zahid
Date: 9/12/2020 10:20:00 PM

Thank you Susan. Stay blessed