Forbidden

What can the matter be Forbidden is the tree of words of earth giving!  But for me the feel the taste  the spiritual touch  that is given is amorous complete yet all of me know it is forbidden on earths judgmental realms of being to late to see the forest for the trees
 My Spirits seems to understand the dilemma forbidden yes the soul is loved.And yes!
  Love so protective so sweet so  calm my burning souls adoration calls my name in the love song zone heart to heart for my attention in his life realm bleeds the request with tears this should be forbidden. Where love falls forbidden and all knew  why! What can the matter be a glowing tree of speech expressions rides high to be  oh to be at home with love where peace be but forbidden when love is free so close but so far away my mind never knew this would lead to the Lords request journey of me. So let it be. Soul untimely tree let the Lord's will be done to face the jealousy so cruel as the grave dead works dead words for God's will must be done what a journey now jealousy fires arise of another at least three how can they be claiming me my love my time when am only one women in love!
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Date: 8/17/2025 12:04:00 PM
very good poem Brenda !!!!its so deep yet capturing loved it ,wonderful ending
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Date: 8/9/2025 12:00:00 AM
Hey Brenda, this poem really captures the bittersweet tension of forbidden love—how it can feel so sweet and deep, yet tangled in struggle and judgment. Your heartfelt words show the push and pull between desire and duty, and that makes it really relatable and powerful. Keep sharing your truth!
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Date: 7/25/2025 2:26:00 PM
Very well written I enjoyed it
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